Description: It's a story with dragons as the main characters.
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The story revolves around one tribe of dragons trying to find a way out of their homeland (a volcano has erupted laying waste to the land). The find a suitable home after three years of searching the whole continent of Megalonia. The island is filled with vegetation and animals and seems to be uninhabited by any native dragon tribes.
Notes: I've written seven chapters so far and I'm looking for someone to review each chapter in the novel and focus mainly on plot and character based criticism.
Link to Piece: The Origin: Prologue Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's a novel Age rating: 12+ Any other comments (Optional):Would be a great help! Thank you so much!
Link to Piece: Little Turtledove (1) Type of Piece: Short Story Age rating: 16+ Any other comments (Optional): This is the first of 3 parts, feel free to check out if you so desire. The rating is more for the themes rather than anything you actually see in the script. Would love to hear your thoughts!
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