lulon is now doing more reviews!

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hey fellow YWS user!

my name is lulon/harper(previously known as harperlouise06), and i’ve been on YWS for eight months. i post both poetry and art, and also do blogs at random. i’d love to be posting more works, but i’m not good at picking works to review. so, i’m taking requests and also feel free to suggest works that i should review! have a lovely day!

will review:
poetry
art
lyrics
short stories

i’m not confident in reviewing novels yet, but i will try if you really want me to!
i'm probably listening to taylor swift.
can you tell i love pink?

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I want to help you get them points, so can you review my poem?

Drowning in Torment

Warning: It references like blood and stuff, so yeah.
“My thoughts are stars I cannot fathom into constellations.”
― John Green, The Fault in Our Stars




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JesseWrites wrote:I want to help you get them points, so can you review my poem?

Drowning in Torment

Warning: It references like blood and stuff, so yeah.

no problem!
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can you tell i love pink?

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@JesseWrites all done!
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Hey lulon! It will be great if you would express your views on my poem Frittering away and tell me if it needs some more corrections. :D
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Hkumar wrote:Hey lulon! It will be great if you would express your views on my poem Frittering away and tell me if it needs some more corrections. :D

no problem! will be done in the hour!
i'm probably listening to taylor swift.
can you tell i love pink?

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@Hkumar it’s complete!
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Hey lulon! I was wondering if you could review my short story, I'm Just A Pet Rock. You don't have to if you don't want to!




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LZPianoGirl wrote:Hey lulon! I was wondering if you could review my short story, I'm Just A Pet Rock. You don't have to if you don't want to!

i sure will after school and dryland!
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can you tell i love pink?

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Hi!
I saw you were looking something for reviewing, so I came here again for a review request. If you don't mind can you review my poem Co-rumination and give your inputs. It's still in the green room as of now ^^'
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Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my new short story. Thank so much!

the after - 1/2




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lchoi wrote:Hi! I would love it if you could take a look at my new short story. Thank so much!

the after - 1/2

of course! that will be done by tomorrow. :)
i'm probably listening to taylor swift.
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Hey! I was wondering if you could review my poems in "A Collection". Thanks! :D :D




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2951302 wrote:Hey! I was wondering if you could review my poems in "A Collection". Thanks! :D :D

for sure!
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Hey there, lillianna! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

Good day!



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