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Cheers everybody!
Has been some time since I last time stepped in here. Now I'm back and even more fired up to continue writing and also to review, of course. I offer my reviews for free, so there's no need to hold back if you're looking for people who'd give you an opinion and help you out, if possible.

Anyways, I'm going to specify what I can do for you.

I will review :
Any kind of fiction except Historical fiction and Fan-fiction. If you want to know what I'm best at, that'd be Sci-Fi and kind of Romance/Fantasy.

Poetry in overall, so far I've done the best in Dramatic Poetry.

Well, I kind of have already said what I won't review, haven't I ^^' . Anyways, If you'd like to know what I focus on in my reviews, that'd be pretty much the feeling of your story, how it feels, how is it enjoyable. Think of it as a review from a reader. Additionaly to that I of course look for grammar mistakes, confusing places and I always try to try my best at giving tips for improvement, if they are needed.

So, if you're looking for help and you don't mind posting one more post here, I'd be glad to look at your work. I usually finish the reviews in the same day as I was asked in, sometimes one day later, but not later than that.

Best regards,
Kyou ~
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Hi there! :)

Can you please take a look at this poem? I'd really, really appreciate it. :)

Thanks!
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Done! Anybody else? =)
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Hey, Can you review this please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76271
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All done! =) Anybody else?
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-mission impossible theme-
*sneaks in, dodges lasers security*
*lock picking Ryousuke's office door*
*places story on Ryousuke's desk*
*open window and jumps out, then flies away with ninja kite*
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

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Done! Somebody else?
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It's not like I'm going to bite >=0
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Could you review this post841635.html#p841635 for me?
Oh and thanks in advance :D
~Tinkem
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