Literary Critiques (It's that simple)

Okay, yes this is a plea for opportunities but I have a few specifications.

I will review ANYTHING but I have new methods that some people may not agree with. I will not bother with capitalization or punctuation because that is what everyone does. I will review the content. So basically come to me if you want your piece reviewed instead of your tiny mistakes.

Hi! You don't seem to have many requests, so here's something. It's the first chapter of a fantasy/alternate history/weird thing novel. Review of content is good, also if you understand what's happening, what you think of the characters and whether it works as a first chapter and makes you want to read more. And, you know, anything else that's wrong with it, lol.

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