Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

Hi Jessica, would you mind taking a look at this poem? post775969.html#p775969
Thanks!

By the way, I love your signature. ATL =<3

And me, and me, and me, and mine, and that thing here I did...
topic71029.html
please

Hey, I wonder if you can review my Bourreau and the Waltz Dancer.
topic70833.html - Chapter 1
post777155.html - Chapter 2 - Part 1

It's kind of historic-ish ( I don't really have the time to go and research ) and romance like. LoL

Thanks 8D

P.S - I was a little bit lazy/busy to fix my chapter 1 so it's still in a rough draft type.

Please review this: post763536.html#p763536 =)) thanks!

I got almost everybody finished, i'll try and get Roal's done a.s.a.p.

hi, jessica.=)) please? topic71543.html

Okay, finished Jash!

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