Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

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Hello Everyone! I'm jdawn ( Jessica ) here and if you need a review on a piece of writing... then post a request here! I'll do it for free in a matter of two days at most.

Notices
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- I will not review books rated 18 and over. No exceptions
- I don't ask for anything back at all, just a smile. : )

I Enjoy Reviewing...

- Science Fiction
- Action/Adventure
- Fantasy

I'm Alright With Reviewing...

- Romance
- Poetry
- Fan Fiction

I'm Not Great At Reviewing...

- Scripts
- Lyrics
- Art & Photography

Though I will review anything, just ask!

:mrgreen: Thank you! I am happy to review anybody!
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Hey, can you review this for me por favor :)
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Be as harsh as you want, I can take it *braces self.
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All finished! thanks for stopping by! I'm open anytime! : )
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Attention Customers! I will be gone until Saturday due to a camp. I will be taking review requests once again on Saturday. If you leave a request, You will be automatically reviewed on Saturday! Thank you and sorry for the inconvenience!
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" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

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Hey Jessica! Hope you have fun at your camp. If you don't mind, could you take a look at this when you get back? There's no rush. It's an old story that I'm going back to and I wanted to see if there's anything I should keep in mind as I continue it. Thanks so much!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=56555
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Okay, I'm back open for buisness! Drop by a request anytime!

Thanks,

Jessica
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" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3




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Hey, it's cool you've opened back up! If you want, can you review my poem "I Wish I Could Tell You". Do you do poetry? Anyway, thanks in advance.

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(piece-by-piece reviews are awesome btw!)

EDIT: Wow, my poem is getting a lot of reviews. So don't feel like you have to review this. However, a lot of them are just general thoughts, so if you want to do an in-depth/edit of my poem, that'd be awesome. But please don't feel forced to review it! :smt001
"This is a song for a scribbled out name
That my love keeps writing again and again
And again"




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Yeah sure I'll review it! I do poery, though it is kinda awkward to me. Oh well, I can manage. :D By the way, congrats on your poem being so popular!
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Finished! : D
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Would Anybody Like A Review??
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Heya, Jessica :)

Would you mind reviewing something for me...? The issue is that it's an eleventh chapter! Taking that into account, if you don't want to review it, that's fine. I'd just like to see what impression it gives off to someone who hasn't read the previous chapters.

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Thanks!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.




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Sure, and just wanted to let you know that I have been reading A Shot Of Arrogance all along. : D Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Finished! And Skins, sorry I couldn't find anything! ; D I think that's a good thing!
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Hey Jessica, mind taking a look at something of mine? It's the prologue and the first part of the first chapter (whew, that's a mouthful...) of my fantasy novel, Munera:

viewtopic.php?t=70759

Thanks a lot in advance! ^^
Ah, it is an empty movement. That is an empty movement. It is.




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Finished! Awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter
"They can put me in prison but they can't stop my face from breakin' out."

" A smile is a curve that can set a lot of things straight."

-Adam Young, My Hero <3



We are great at fearing the wrong things.
— Hank Green