Wanted Review- 'The Heart Of A God'

Link- http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post682403.html#p682403
It's a fantasy/romantic fiction novel ( The Introduction and the first chapter only).
I would really appreciate if you do review!
Please do.

Hi I want a review for my story. I have posted its prologue, chapter-1, 2,3. I know its difficult so you just read prologue and chapter-1 and give me a review for chapter-2 and 3. I hope thats not much.
LINK:
A Criminal's Heart-Prologue
A Criminal's Heart Chapter-1(OLIVIA)
Chapter-2
A criminal's heart chapter-3
THANKS IN ADVANCE!!!!!!

I wrote a new story and I'm still not sure if I should keep or ditch. It's a romantic fiction called 'Mistress'.So if anyone would be so kind, please and thank you.

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