Fiery Critiques

I don't mind, you guys. There are a few guidelines though.

*I will not review horror. That's the end of that.
*Fan-fiction is all right, but I may be unfamiliar with the series.
*Please, if anyone writes Christian fiction, it's encouraged here!

All right. There you go.

Could you review my very short prologue to my new crime thriller?
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Thanks a million,
~Ben

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