The last cry of crime
Crime thriller by Ben Franks
(Violent imagery might be unsuitable for some)
Prologue.
The blue flames lapsed violently at me, like a harsh whip bearer sustaining their delight. I gasped for breath only to be succumbed by oily smoke. It drowned me like a chaotic whirlwind at sea. The flames grew closer now; the heat intolerable. This would be the end of me, the end of the road. I cursed in anger and began attacking the smog that sunk in the air around me, whaling my hands and arms around like a violent hound. I wanted to get out and I wanted to stay alive. I cried in terror as the flames began to devour my lower limbs. The harsh, hot atmosphere was dressing me in its death. I wouldn’t last long now; the air was thinning by the minute and the smoke was clasping the glands of my throat.
I cried once more, watching the blue flicker with the orange. The flame’s devil eyes were advertising my fate, cynically torturing me for my every last second. It played with me, cursed by its need for entertainment. I tried crying once more but I couldn’t produce any more sound than the shatter of coughs that followed. A clatter of groans and gapes for fresh air and the faint desire to be free of this hell torched my mind. Pain crawled up my body, tickling its burns upon my skin. I fell onto the burning wood below me and gave my corpse to the devil’s flame. Its dry blaze seared in victory. Its victim, hunted.
A single tear trailed from my eye, down my soft warm cheeks. It was the last bit of peace I would ever know; my body lay to roast under the devil’s watchful eye.
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