Extra! Extra! Will Critique for Food!

Hey everyone! I've recently been finding myself with some free time I figure that I would like to critique some work, but my computer is slow in loading recently so it's a pain to navigate through forums so it's easier for people who want critiques to come to me. (In no way will my slow computer effect whether or not I critique your work)

Please state the following in a request:
-Name of Piece
-Genre
-Link (much appreciated)

I'll usually critique anything, but I'm better with stories rather than poems. Thanks!

-Jules!

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Please review that for me!!! I really need the review. No one is reviewing it on their own, so I came here!

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Finished! Hope it helps!

Hey, can you review this for me? It's called Purple Magic and it needs HELP!!!
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-Lydia <3

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