I be review monster!

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chasingcolts21
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Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:53 pm
chasingcolts21 says... · Sun Apr 05, 2009 7:53 pm
Hello, I'm Colt. I just wandered randomly over here and thought that I should make one of these things.

My specialties include:
Science Fiction (all aspects)
Fantasy (all aspects)
Characters
Dialogue
Grammar
Stylistic Devices

My Weaknesses:
Poetry
Transitions
Mysteries

Post your links here, and I'll review whatever you want. You don't have to give me points or anything, I don't care. :P

Don't get me wrong here, I'll review anything and everything, even mysteries and poetry, it's just that I don't really write well in those categories. And, if you post them, I can strengthen my weaknesses there.

Also, state how detailed you want your review and if you want the review on a certain area, let me know. I can do very detailed reviews!

I be the Review Monster! Rawr! :D
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Threnody
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:50 am
Threnody says... · Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:50 am
Well. I'll give you a shot. Hi ChasingColts! Nice to meet you. Here's a prologue to a fantasy story I'm just beginning. It's called the Piper. Here it is~

topic44955.html

Thank you so much!

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Forever Threnody
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~ The Little Prince~




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chasingcolts21
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Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:11 pm
chasingcolts21 says... · Wed Apr 08, 2009 1:11 pm
Thanks. I'll write the review now. :P
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Threnody
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:58 am
Threnody says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 3:58 am
Hello! I would really appreciate it you could take a look at this poem and review to your most harshest extreme. Thank you so so so much!

Link
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Thanks again!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody
“One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes”
~ The Little Prince~




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Jamie_rocks
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:45 am
Jamie_rocks says... · Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:45 am
Hey! If you get around to it, I could really use a review on the preface I just posted for a novel I'm working on. It's supernatural, you didn't mention anything about that in your list, so...

I really just need an overall opinion, constructive criticism, things like that. It's pretty short, so it shouldn't take you that long to critique. Thanks in advance!
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DreamyAlice
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Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:22 am
DreamyAlice says... · Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:22 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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