Advice On Style and Structure

So, I had a thread up some time ago. However, it went pretty ignored and eventually got burried under the newer and more popular threads. Still, I decide to begin a new thread in hopes that I could give special instruction, most importantly on word style and structure.

Anyway, my day is pretty empty so I have plenty of time to review. All I ask is that you not give me pieces that exceed around 2000 words. They are, well...long, at least the way I see it.

All I ask is that you leave me:

~Title
~Word Count
~Summary
and of course
~A Link

I review mostly:

Well, I'll review just about anything except for Sci-Fi. I'm especially fond of the Other and Romance Forums but I'll give attention to anyone who asks. However, I'm almost no use in the Poetry Forums.

Otherwise:

My services are free, though the review for a review ideal is a rather nice on but still optional.


In Progress:
None


Done:
Back to OUr Roots

Hey. Thanks in advance for this.

Title: Back To Our Roots
Word Count: Really short I promise!
Summary: It's an essay really. Expressing my idealism on the modern world and society.
Link:
topic46038.html

Thanks!

Done, any more takers?

I bump shamelessly.

Come on now, anyone else. I've got the next 8 hours and nothing to do...please!

Hey , you seem to want a review, and ill happy supply you with one


title: Refugee. (although, im currently thinking of a more inventive title)
word count: Around 1000
Summary: a small family of refugees on a carriage from Lebanon to israel to seek refuge
Link: topic47103.html


Thanks in advancee

DONE!

I've got the whole week off work, please give me reviews....I'm hungry.

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