The Shredder

Oh...sorry I thought the list was what you WILL critique, not what you won't. My mistake.

--Medusa.

GRAND RE-OPENING!!! Wooo!

Actually, nothing is new, really. So really, it's just the "Re-opening". Woo?

you OWE me!

So please can you critique this?
However i do suggest that you read the previous chapters to get the understanding of chapter six.

It is in my portfolio under "Canaby Witches" Yes, I know they are witchs and the bible saysThou shalt not suffer to spare a wItches life, saying they are bad, but really mine are good witches.

So please!


---Jon---
P.S. -- I only said that quote because I know your "In tune" with god

Finished. Thank you for making me read 6 CHAPTERS. I should charge you points.

Na, just kidding. You're right, I owed you.

Anyway, any more requests?

Hey Thunder.

I'd be much endebted to you if you could give me your opinion on The Broken -- Traitor Colonel -- Chapter One. It's the first draft of the opening to my novel that I would like to (ultimately and hopefully and maybe) get published. It therefore needs lots of polishing, no?

Thanks. =)

Indeed. Done.

This is other fiction, the first chapter called "How I survived high school."

Please, please take a llok at it....Thank you very much in advance.


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Are you open to doing advanced critiques?

RE - OPENING!

Again.

But I have a goal now. Join the second most exclusive club on YWS, and eventually the most exclusive club.

Chances are the second won't come until I'm 25, but I need to get critiquing. So bombard me with requests.

WE'RE OPEN, PEOPLE!

Sorry. Yes, this is a bump. Yes, I'm trying to get some critiques for myself.

See the main post for information.

How about topic43618.html

here is a little bit about it!

A childish girl who lives in a childish illusion that the world is loving and death doesn't exist. However, when she moves in with her stepmother everything will change. Simply meaning that a man comes along and bursts her bubble. Come and read the horrifying and disturbing horror/comedy about a girl and her neighbor, a homicidal mass murdering maniac!

What do you critique?

I can critique lyrics, fiction, scripts, and photography, with the following exceptions:

-Horror
-Romance/Chick lit
-Fanfiction(depends, actually. Tell me what it's based on, and I might do it)
-Rap music
-Anything rated R

Sorry.

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