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I tend to have issues choosing something to review... So I'm going to let you do that for me!

I will review any fiction, though I specialize in fantasy.

Just give me the title, genre, a brief summary and, of course, the link. Something along the line of my example would be great:
Title: The Mind
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: A young Faerie discovers that she has the Power needed to rescue the new ruler of their world. The only problem is, she doesn't know who it is.
Link: topic42472.html

Oh, and if you have a preference for how critical I am or on what aspect of your fiction you wish for me to concentrate on, please specify in your request as well.

-Lydia
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Title: Sheep
Genre: Other
Summary: Uh...me conversing with my inner self.
Link: topic42614.html

Thanks LydiaB! Um...could you concentrate on the style and voice? This is highly experimental and I'd like to see how it goes. And be as critical as you want.
There once was a cat.
He wasn’t particularly fat.
Fuzzy was his favorite mat.
And really, that was that.

Oh, but did you really think so?
Keep reading, it’s just the start of the show!
And as for how far this tale will go…
Well, even the cat doesn’t know.




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I did the review, though I didn't feel there was much for me to do.
It looked to be well-written and thought out and the style and voice was fine, in my opinion.

I hope that you keep writing and experimenting with new styles.
-Lydia
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Anyone else?
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Anyone else have something they want me to review for them?
Is Pat Buchanan the answer to everything in your life? If so, put "Pat Buchanan" in your signature.

If you're looking for a good fantasy story in need of help...
Purple Magic
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Anyone else need a review?
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If you're looking for a good fantasy story in need of help...
Purple Magic
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