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mimimac
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Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:24 pm
mimimac says... · Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:24 pm
Hey.. I'm mimimac.
I'd rather not review poetry because I'm not that good at it!
Will review any prose! Especially love fantasy fiction but that's just me :)
My reviews usually include grammar, sentence structure, spelling and overall impressions. I try to be as honest as possible when critiquing.

As payment, all I would like is your opinion in my guestbook on whether or not you found my review helpful :D
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Mars
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:20 pm
Mars says... · Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:20 pm
Hey! If you could get around to critiquing my short story I'd very much appreciate it.

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Thanks!
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mimimac
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Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:56 am
mimimac says... · Sun Mar 15, 2009 8:56 am
Hey Mars, finished! Loved it all. I wish could have made the review more detailed but I could hardly find any mistakes.
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xDudettex
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Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:43 pm
xDudettex says... · Sun Mar 15, 2009 3:43 pm
Hey mimimac =]

Please could you review my story; Lily Foxglove, chapter one - it's in other fiction.

I'd really appreciate it if you could :D

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mimimac
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Mon Mar 16, 2009 3:13 pm
mimimac says... · Mon Mar 16, 2009 3:13 pm
Hi! Dudette, finished! Again... awesome job! :)
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imapoemperson
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:37 am
imapoemperson says... · Wed Mar 18, 2009 12:37 am
please review i am sorry that it is out of the middle of my novel Dae's Vans is the companion to it by peanutgallery007
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mimimac
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Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:28 pm
mimimac says... · Wed Mar 18, 2009 3:28 pm
imapoemperson... Done! Great job :)
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mhmmcolleenx0
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Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:41 am
mhmmcolleenx0 says... · Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:41 am
Hey, could you review this for me? It's in other fiction.

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Thanks!
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Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:39 pm
mimimac says... · Fri Mar 20, 2009 1:39 pm
mhmmcolleenx0, Done! :) Enjoyed it :D
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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:39 am
DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:39 am
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