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Jamie_rocks · 2008-10-05T05:17:09Z

Okay, my school's fall break is officially over, :(, but I'm still reviewing. Of course during the week I'm uber busy, but I promise I'll get to any requests as fast as possible, and still keep up with the in-depth reviews. WHAT I WILL CRITIQUE: *Advanced Critiques *Any fiction *Any rating. I've written 'R' pieces so I can't exactly refuse to critique them *Multiple chapters *More than one request by the same author (If you have more than one piece that needs a review, leave all the links here.) I'm willing to critique non-fiction, but if I have a lot of fiction critiques the non-fiction stories will probably get bumped down. WHAT I WON'T CRITIQUE: *Art *Lyrics *Poetry *Fan-Fiction *Pieces that haven't been proofread at least once. I refuse to read through something that has a huge amount of glaring typos. It bothers me to no end. It's not that I'm unwilling to review art, lyrics, or poetry, it's just that I would be so utterly un-useful that you would chase me out of the forum screaming bloody murder. WHAT I WANT IN RETURN: *Points (I'm saving up to post an advanced critique story) *A review of my novel in progress The Love Note *A message on my profile *And just because they said I couldn't ask for it, a kitten to sacrifice to the SPEW gods. Other Things to Remember: *Don't ask for a fanfic critique, because you won't get it. *I'm willing to review scripts, but don't shoot me if I sound like a clueless idiot *I'll critique historical fiction, but chances are I won't be able to point out historical errors, only writing ones. *Payment is not required *I will do my best to rip your story to shreds, so don't get offended when I do. Why you Should Choose me: *I'm a very harsh critiquer. You will get an honest yet helpful review every time. *I have way too much free time, so the review is guaranteed to be as in-depth as possible. *I belong to multiple writing sites and have a lot of experience in critiquing, even if I don't have that many reviews here on YWS *I get straight A's in English, so you can bet I'll catch any grammar mistake you throw at me. *Payment isn't required (Everyone loves free stuff, right) So post away and give me something to do before I die of boredom. To be Critiqed 1. 2. 3. fun4eva ch. 6 4. Lord Anzius 1 5. Lord Anzius 2 6. Lord Anzius 3 7. Wisemann Done 1. Cormac and Eddie 2. Born Again 3. Is Hope Enough 4. Potential prologue 5. Jon 6. House Warming 7. Chapter 1: Alice 8. Mother 9. How I Survived High School ch. 1 10. How I Survived High School ch. 2 As you can see, once I get or complete your request, you'll be added to one of the lists above, so make sure you come back and check where you are. Also, feel free to hound me with your request if I don't get to it fast enough.

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Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:54 am

Jon says... · Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:54 am

www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38146.html

This is chapter seven of seven, to get what's going on you might want to read the first six, although, I only want a critique on chapter seven.

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Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:41 am

Jamie_rocks says... · Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:41 am

Wow I missed a lot. Sorry for the delay guys, I'll get started right now.

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Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:52 pm

LoveableLittleSock says... · Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:52 pm

Hey. Could you please review this for me? It'd be greatly appreciated. Just remember to read the link first, okay? =]

topic38505.html

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DreamyAlice says... · Sun Apr 09, 2023 11:15 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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