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It is fantasy fiction and Chapter Six of well Chapter Six :D

But I'm afraid you'll have to read all Five chapters leading up to that if you want to know what's happening in Chapter Six, but you don't have to, I only want a crit on this.

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I posted this a little while ago and go 0 reviews =[ so I guess I'll just pass it round a bit ^^ a little reply would be nice ^_^




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Be harsh, won't you please?
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