Help me get my fourth star, please!!

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Pompadour
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Sat Feb 08, 2014 11:50 am
Pompadour says... · Sat Feb 08, 2014 11:50 am
I'd really appreciate a review on this:

Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title)

And the second chapter too, if you don't mind. =3

Thanks!
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Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:17 pm
musingsmutterings says... · Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:17 pm
I'd love a review on my short story The Last Apple Tree if you have the time. And if you'd like a review in return I'd be happy to oblige!




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Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:22 pm
deleted30 says... · Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:22 pm
@musingsmutterings, sure thing! I'm going out at the moment but I'd be happy to review that for you once I get back. :D

Oh, and I don't really need anything reviewed in return, but you're welcome to look at my portfolio: profile/Lucrezia/portfolio/461419

Feel free to have at anything in there. :smt003

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