carbonCore Cleanup Co.

Hello all.

I review prose only.

I am critical. If you think your story is the best thing since sliced bread, it is probably a good idea to ask someone else for a review. I will not sugar-coat or embellish; I say it as it is. If it's good, it's good. If it's crap, it's crap. I know you only through your prose, so I will not spare your feelings.

My reviews tend to be long and detailed, regardless of whether I like your story or not. Here are a couple of samples.

• Critical review
• Analytical review
• Positive review

If the above does not discourage you, feel free to request a review. My reviews are free -- you will owe me nothing. However, if you want to make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, I'd love to see you edit your work and improve it. Because what else are reviews for?

Currently open.

Your servant,
cC

Hi there.
I haven't had many reviews on this piece, and I was hoping that you could give me suggestions for improvement. I know it's not good. I wrote in just an hour and I should have taken more time to go back and revise it while the iron was still hot, but I did not. I hope to hear back from you soon with one of your awesome reviews.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99706

I would like to get a harsh, thoughtful review on All is Well, Perforce.

I'm seeking someone who tries to understand the... er, highly literary(?) way in which I approach this piece, rather than suggesting it does not sound like popular work. Thanks!

EDIT: You called something melancholy tripe? Hmm.

Yo, carbonCore.

I was in the mood to have my writing ripped to shreds when I came across your WRFF thread, so I figured you'd be a great person to do that for me. I'm also going to be an enormous pain in the butt and ask you to review a third chapter for me.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Three)

I'm aware you may want to punch me in the spleen for requesting this, so I am more than happy to give you a brief summary of what's happened in the novel so far. Just let me know and I'll give you one.

Please and thank you!

skorlir wrote:EDIT: You called something melancholy tripe? Hmm.

I see no reason to call a kettle anything but a kettle, @skorlir :p

Unnamed Novel - Prologue Attack at your own pleasure

I'd really appreciate a review on this:

At My Sister's

thanks,
Puck.