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Chapter 5- The rest-stop When I woke up, I didn't move, I just stared up at the always starry sky. …Thu Nov 11, 2010 11:02 pm -
Chapter 4-The Forest I knew we had to leave straight away. Get away before the soul suckers came an…Wed Nov 10, 2010 12:36 am -
Chapter 3-Still Karina tried to get the lifeless lips to latch on- she hadn't realised yet. The cor…Tue Nov 09, 2010 11:38 pm -
NOTE: This has recieve a 16+ rating because the first part of the chapter does not reflect what the…Mon Nov 08, 2010 3:27 am -
Forward I stared as my home was ransacked. The Strange Ones were destroying my house! The way they …Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:13 pm -
Hey guys, this is the revised version of hatched, I hope it's a little better than the draft! :smt0…Sat Nov 06, 2010 1:46 pm -
*I know it's not quite finished, but I promise I'll post soon!* Chapter 2. Jake leaned against the …Fri Nov 05, 2010 5:07 pm -
It was a sunny day in New york. The white paved streets snaked through the city, light traffic humm…Fri Nov 05, 2010 3:21 pm -
PREFACE “I broke a nail—again!” Tatiana whined, as she took her hands off the keyboard and studied …Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:57 pm -
Seven As Benny started the Tardis up, I realized that I had missed its noise. There wasn’t really a…Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:52 am -
Six It is quiet in my cell. Very quiet. One of those Quiets that is just quiet. Also I might be goi…Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:50 am -
Five I hate shopping. Loathe it, but it is necessary. The terrible burden of normality must be born…Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:48 am -
Chapter 3 My palms shook. That was it. I was going to jail. Again. I knew that the police were sure…Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:20 am -
Chapter 1 It was coming. She could feel it. The burn, the flames…the fire! Her rage poured through …Thu Nov 04, 2010 11:11 pm -
Alrighty, the second chapter of my novel~ish thing. If you haven't read the first chapter, I advise…Thu Nov 04, 2010 2:45 pm -
-x-x-x- The man is idle. His brain is buzzing with heightened anticipation. He would get up and pac…Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:56 pm -
Year 3000 So, we all have wondered at one point in our lives how our world came about. It a curious…Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:44 pm -
First things first, yes we all hate Prologues. But, I'm leaving it in here. Don't like it? Don't cr…Sat Oct 30, 2010 5:37 pm -
Chapter One: The Mission ( Mason ) September 17, 2063 A trickle of sweat dripped from Mason's brow,…Thu Oct 28, 2010 7:55 pm -
Hey everybody! First of all, feel free to rip this apart. : ) I'm working on adding lenth and it's …Thu Oct 21, 2010 8:13 pm -
So this is chapter two, for those who said the first post wasn't quite enough to critique on. I hop…Wed Oct 20, 2010 1:01 pm -
Hey guys, this is my latest work and I'd love some feedback on it. This isn't much, and it will be …Mon Oct 18, 2010 5:22 pm -
Hey guys, I'm not really sure about this. I have other chapters (not posted yet) and everything is …Fri Oct 15, 2010 11:47 pm -
What is life? Is it something that only exists once, or does it recycles itself over and over after…Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:11 am -
Chapter 2: The Leaving “All interns bound to Earth must have all paperwork turned in to the Registr…Thu Oct 14, 2010 10:27 pm -
Hey there fans (if there're any left) I know it's been a while, but here's the fifth chapter. Follo…Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:47 am -
I had seen weird things before, but this took the cake. In fact, it not only took the cake, but it …Sat Oct 09, 2010 4:31 pm -
*Please tear it apart.* The Game Jeremy Stryker walked into the quickly filling theater. Brushing t…Mon Oct 04, 2010 1:58 am -
Hi! Well, this is a new story I wrote and wanted to get some critiques so rip it apart! I appreciat…Sun Sep 26, 2010 11:10 pm -
Encounter “Ahh! It’s HOT” “What would you like to order, Sir?” “Iced Water! And some vanilla ice cr…Sun Sep 26, 2010 8:09 pm -
Chocolate Muffins and Chilled Iced Tea I remember this part so vividly. Possibly because of the cho…Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:00 pm -
rated R for swear words and. . . other stuff.Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:36 am -
October 5th came. Oregon was still cleaning its shores and waters. It didn't take long for Roberts …Wed Sep 08, 2010 9:58 pm -
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My second piece, please critique.Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:21 am -
Prologue “But, are you sure that there is absolutely nothing you can do for him?” “Positive, ma’am.…Mon Sep 06, 2010 7:58 pm -
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1326 Hours April 5th, 25 AS French Carrier Aigle YWS Station The view screens displayed only static…Wed Aug 25, 2010 7:32 am -
The title will make more sense if/when I post more. This time, it's relevant! Though not immediatel…Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:04 pm -
She looked up at the purple-blue sky, observing the swollen grey clouds. The wind picked up, liftin…Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:00 pm -
"It's been been 18 years since I first saw his face... Now I regret seeing him again because I know…Wed Aug 11, 2010 11:00 pm -
Two other guys followed Jesse around to make one side full of the circle. The rest of the hunting g…Fri Aug 06, 2010 7:06 pm -
*Yawns* Its 04:23 here and I am still on my computer, when I was aiming to go to bed at around 23:3…Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:02 pm -
So, this idea sort of came to me overnight. It doesn't really have any direction right now though, …Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:05 pm -
Ernie walked into his office at Cibus. Meagan, his secretary, handed him his schedule for the day. …Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:29 pm -
Ernest Rudolph Rawson was born on March 23, 2025 in Kinsad, Maine. A rather small community, it had…Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:11 am -
Snow was falling gently in the pine forests of southwestern Canada, slowly coating every rock and p…Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:58 am -
CHAPTER 2: Turing On the Flirt Everyone was sitting around a small campfire in the area that we cal…Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:31 am -
Here's scene three as promised. I'll try to finish scene four as soon as possible. Lee was brought …Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:46 am -
(Thanks to those who commented on the first chapter! :smt003 I know that this one's a lot longer...…Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:42 pm
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