Charm's Work

Charm's Work

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    Charm's Work Club Update · Jul 5, 2019
    Hi guys so I have been saying for about a year now that I will give those of you who are interested my 2nd draft of Juno Blackwood to read and give feedback, but I am at this point where I am unsure if I want to give you the full 2nd draft when I have finished editing it or if I should post it chapter by chapter on YWS like I did with the 1st draft. I can start submitted a chapter a week now but to give you the full novel it will take more months. I'm asking because I am unsure and I want to hear what you think. I originally wanted to finish editing, then give you the full manuscript, and while you read it, I was going to begin writing the 1st draft of the sequel. But it's been so long since I first offered my 2nd draft and I feel bad so taking so long.

    BluesClues replied · Jul 5, 2019

    I think you'll probably get better comprehensive feedback if we get it all at once when it's done!


    Raindeer replied · Jul 5, 2019

    I agree with Blue- full manuscript! I think I’ll be able to give feedback in a more free way than chapter by chapter reviews. :)


    Charm replied · Jul 5, 2019

    That's what I was thinking, but I'm glad to hear you agree. I'm not sure if you remember, but the book is split into two parts. I should be done with the first part soon so maybe you can read that and give feedback while I edit the second part. Or I can give you the full manuscript, whichever you guys think is best.


    BluesClues replied · Jul 5, 2019

    My memory is pretty bad, so I'd want the whole thing all at once!


    Mageheart replied · Jul 6, 2019

    I also think a full manuscript might be better, but I'd love to read it in parts if you're looking for feedback sooner rather than later! I'm not sure how quickly I'd be able to look through it, but I could definitely read part one when you're done revising it.


    Charm replied · Jul 6, 2019

    @magestorrow Thanks!

    I think I'm just going to give you all the full manuscript once I'm done. I got through many chapters today so I think if I put the work in I should be finished in a month or two. I'm getting to the better parts soon so there won't be much to do at least I don't think there will be. Despite all my editing, I'm still unsatisfied with the first part. If this book sucks I've been thinking that I might not write this part of the story and make the sequel the beginning and then just use this book as backstory (if that makes sense because that's pretty much what this book is, it's the beginning to Margo's witch life). BUT that's only if you guys think it's bad lol.



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