Ordadus

Ordadus

Latest updates on the fantasy/adventure novel by Wolfie

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  • Created Mon Apr 28, 2014 11:23 pm

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  • Carlito replied · Mar 22, 2016

    I'm so excited :D :D


    SpiritedWolfe replied · Mar 22, 2016

    Oh, I didn't realize you were rewriting ^^ Yaaay!!

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    Ordadus Club Update · Apr 11, 2015
    I've noticed that "Ordadus" is very often spelled as "Oradus" by some of my readers. I admit that the latter looks better in writing, but I do like the sound of "Ordadus" better. If I do ever decide to change its spelling, it won't be for a while, but what are your opinions? Which spelling do you like better?

    r4p17 replied · Apr 11, 2015

    :O I thought that the latter was how it was spelled. :P I never realized I got the pronunciation wrong. I like Oradus better.


    BrumalHunter replied · Apr 11, 2015

    Ordadus rolls of the tongue due to the alliteration inside the name. Oradus, on the other hand, is simply too short and doesn't have as much power.

    I vote Ordadus.


  • Wolfi replied · Apr 7, 2015

    Technically, part of a chapter...

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    Ordadus Club Update · Mar 20, 2015
    I hate Chapter One, I really do. I've developed Ordadus so much more in my brain since I wrote it, and ugh the writing just seems terrible! :P I've already completed another draft of it, starting the book instead with Andrew in Afghanistan, but I found that it gave away too much information about Andrew and his history, when that originally wasn't revealed until Chapter Three with Daniel. So the second revision will arrive soon. Chapter Six before, though! Then maybe I'll be over this malicious case of writer's block...

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    Wolfi · Jan 29, 2015
    A note to my readers: I will be posting chapter "summaries" soon in a club forum so that when I post Chapter Six, you guys will have remembered everything from past chapters. :)
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    Ordadus Club Update · Aug 12, 2014
    Is the capitalization of military rankings appropriate? (I don't know much about military things, so any help is appreciated.)
    Here are some examples of this in Chapter Five:
    Make sure that nurse cleans him up enough for the Captain tomorrow morning.

    Without answering, the Lieutenant bowed his head and left

    Is it supposed to be like "Father" and "the father?"
    Thank you for your help, guys!
    Oh, and the editing/lengthening for Chapter Five is done. Even if you already read the first "edition," please skim over Chapter Five again, as many things have been changed. I snatched back all the information I gave you guys before about Ordadus... Mwahaha!

    r4p17 replied · Aug 12, 2014

    Hey Wolf, captain, unless it is part of someone's title shouldn't be capitalized.


    Wolfi replied · Aug 12, 2014

    Ok, thank you! That's what I thought, but for some reason I found myself capitalizing it all the time.


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    Wolfi · Aug 12, 2014
    AAAAGAGGHHGHHGHHHG!
    This is the second time I lost all my editing of Chapter Five. Ever since my Google Docs account went away, I've been having issues...
    This time, it was the stupid "CTRL A" thing that selected everything and then I typed and lost everything. It was on the Publishing Center so I lost everything.
    Sorry this is taking so long, guys! :(
    I must be more careful or use Word Documents, like before... Or a pencil and paper! ;)

    r4p17 replied · Aug 12, 2014

    Aww! That's too bad :( I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. :)


    Wolfi replied · Aug 12, 2014

    I'm going to try and make Chapter Six/Seven more adventurous, since I know that that has been lacking so far. :)

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    Ordadus Club Update · Aug 4, 2014
    All references to Vietnam in earlier chapters have been changed to Afghanistan.
    In the meantime, Chapter Five's editing process will be complete very soon.

    r4p17 replied · Aug 4, 2014

    Wooohooo!


    Wolfi replied · Aug 4, 2014

    I appreciate your enthusiasm! xD


    r4p17 replied · Aug 5, 2014

    :P *receives appreciation for enthusiasm*

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    Ordadus Club Update · Jul 31, 2014
    ~CHAPTER FIVE IS CURRENTLY BEING EDITED~
    I politely request that no one else reviews it until I am done! The character of Tomas is just a mess, but I do have a better plan for him.

  • Wolfi replied · Jul 29, 2014

    Darn, the @ doesn't work on club walls!

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    Ordadus Club Update · Jun 14, 2014
    Chapter Four is rather short, and I apologize. It will most likely be combined with Chapter Three later on.

    SpiritedWolfe replied · Jun 14, 2014

    Wait, has it been posted?

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    Ordadus Club Update · May 24, 2014
    UPDATE: Gabriel ----> Daniel

    Due to CANI (Conflicting Angel Name Issues):D, Andrew's brother has changed his name: Gabriel is now Daniel.

  • Wolfi replied · May 22, 2014

    All fishes are welcome, especially Dory! Thanks for joining! :D


    ThereseCricket replied · May 22, 2014

    Thanks!!



Nouns can verb very well actually, they verb better than some verbs do.
— winterwolf0100