Ordadus

Ordadus

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    Ordadus Club Update · Aug 12, 2014
    Is the capitalization of military rankings appropriate? (I don't know much about military things, so any help is appreciated.)
    Here are some examples of this in Chapter Five:
    Make sure that nurse cleans him up enough for the Captain tomorrow morning.

    Without answering, the Lieutenant bowed his head and left

    Is it supposed to be like "Father" and "the father?"
    Thank you for your help, guys!
    Oh, and the editing/lengthening for Chapter Five is done. Even if you already read the first "edition," please skim over Chapter Five again, as many things have been changed. I snatched back all the information I gave you guys before about Ordadus... Mwahaha!

    r4p17 replied · Aug 12, 2014

    Hey Wolf, captain, unless it is part of someone's title shouldn't be capitalized.


    Wolfi replied · Aug 12, 2014

    Ok, thank you! That's what I thought, but for some reason I found myself capitalizing it all the time.



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