Noelle
I hate Chapter One, I really do. I've developed Ordadus so much more in my brain since I wrote it, and ugh the writing just seems terrible!
I've already completed another draft of it, starting the book instead with Andrew in Afghanistan, but I found that it gave away too much information about Andrew and his history, when that originally wasn't revealed until Chapter Three with Daniel. So the second revision will arrive soon. Chapter Six before, though! Then maybe I'll be over this malicious case of writer's block...
