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This is the second chapter of my new project Solarwinds. I love any critiques that you guys can give me or just a nod to say if you liked it ...

Yeah weird name if you can tell I got help from sabradan. Anyways its a Prologue Prologue In the depths of Earth's shadow lays the evil that people do not ...

Solarwinds: Life in Linear Virginity “Baby I'm angry; Baby I'm scared. We're living in a dark time and nobody cares…” - Hold On, Bif Naked Cheese Holes We are between ...

PROLOGUE It had always been there for as long as I could remember. Frail, yellowing lace hung limply at odd angles at every window. Nothing had ever been done to ...

Darkness Darkness surrounded her like the Wicker-Woman’s Shroud. She tried to open her mouth and scream, but the rough gag inhibited her from making a sound. The quickened beats of ...

this is pretty rough, but I wanted to put it up here. CL. Chapter Two This was the most unkindest cut of all.Julius Cæsar. ACT III Scene 2. “Lupis Solaris ...

*I don't need help with typos, because I'm really good at catching them when I reread, which I haven't done yet...but if there are any obvious grammar mistakes that I've ...

I posted this way back when I first joined and thanks to some very much need help from Snoink I edited the first chapter...and here it is, tell me how ...

*What is the name? Finola pressed. Tell him, the wolf rides towards his town, he will know who. Now go child, he is not that far ahead of you!* Continued... ...

Maybe I'm better at fantasy rather than realistic fiction... I dunno. By the way, the poem thing he says is garbage, I'm working on somethin better right now Please critique ...

Prologue: Bryant. His parents named him that because to speak his name your lips would for a full circle. He had his father’s blue eyes, his mother’s ebony hair and ...

We are sorry. Inquisitor, Zentillius, and Meshalidar have been suspended due to mendacious and pathetic behavior. Please excuse him.

The house was quiet, still. I cry, beg to move, but my arms, my legs, are frozen. Shock encircles me. I am numb. The TV flashes silently in the corner, ...

I hope this helps to illuminate the story more, this still is only a small piece, and no where near the whole extent. Ban walk in front of the elf ...

- Before I start this, let me just have a chance to say that this IS my first time at writing. Please, understand that I am not perfect and I ...