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Sat Nov 21, 2009 3:35 am
Shearwater says...



Will Review
Novels
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Scripts
Art
Poetry
Other

Might Consider
Fanfiction
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Lyrics

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Provide a link please!

Side Note: I enjoy reading your feedback.


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Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:47 am
Fruits_Basket99Tohru says...



Hi Pink, this is Fruit! :D I'm so happy to find someone who will gladly review FanFiction! :) So could you please review my 1st story? Pretty please? (xD)

Here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=54552; it
's called SSBB New Adventure Story FanFiction. It's based on the Super Smash Bros. Brawl (SSBB) game for Wii, so I would like to know if you could still understand the story even if you haven't heard of SSBB before.

Also, nit-picks are fine, and if you know about SSBB and its Adventure Mode, I want to know how you think I did on that aspect as well. Thank you in advance! :smt001 :smt002
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you."
--Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134

Do you need a review?




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Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:23 am
Shearwater says...



Fruits-Done.

Anyone else? =D
I do provide exquisite cookies...
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Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:48 am
Mo. says...



Hey Pink! Can you review my drawing? Here's the link:

I Love my Music.
Mo. was here. :) mwahahaha




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Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:34 pm
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Mo.-Done

Anyone else need a review? :D
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Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:24 pm
Shearwater says...



Anybody?
Please :)
hahaa
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Fri Nov 27, 2009 6:17 am
Rascalover says...



Romantic fiction: Let Me Love You

this is chapter 12

Brief description of what has happened before: Isabella was in a car accident a few days later her boyfriend whose in a band breaks up with her. Jay, the boyfriend, has a cousin named Gary and that how Isabella met Jay. He is also in the band. He consoles Isabella cause theyre best friends and they slowly fall in love. He treats her to a weekend get away and gives her a promise ring to always love her. But now shes pregnant and she doesnt know what to do. whether to tell him or not.

link: topic54963.html

Please review thanks,
Tiffany
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*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html




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Fri Nov 27, 2009 5:26 pm
SpencerNolanRivers says...



Here is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on. Here is the link topic54952.html It's a fantasy piece.
House: People interest me. Conversations don't.
Foreman: Maybe because conversations go both ways.
House & Foreman: Like Thirteen.




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Fri Nov 27, 2009 10:54 pm
Shearwater says...



Rascalover-Done.

I enjoyed your story, I might just go back and read the beginning if I have the chance.
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Sat Nov 28, 2009 7:19 am
Shearwater says...



KikiSaysRAWR!-Done.

Whoo!
Anyone else?

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Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:31 pm
*coco says...



Hey, could you please check out my story when you're not too busy, I know it's quite long but I'd love to hear what you think of it so far. Here are the links:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html (chapter 1)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53746.html (chapter 2)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53800.html (chapter 3)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53888.html (chapter 4)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54024.html (chapter 5)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic54589.html (chapter 6)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic55095.html (chapter 7)

Thanks so much!
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Fri Dec 04, 2009 2:08 am
Shearwater says...



Hi *coco
You've got a long list there so I can't promise you I'll finish it fast. But I will review them, just give me some time =]
I'll continue to edit this post as I finish reviewing your chapters.

Chapters

One: *reviewed
Two: *reviewed
Three:*reviewed
Four:*reviewed
Five:*reviewed
Six:*reviewed
Seven:*reviewed

-meanwhile, I'll still be taking other reviews.
:elephant:
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phew, finished. :D
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Thu Dec 10, 2009 12:17 am
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Oh please! I need your time and patience. Please review my chapter 2!

A Little Fantasy Chapter 2: Never Forgotten
topic55391.html

I will be grateful to your generous and kind efforts.
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anima9-Done.

Anyone else??? I'm free!
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Fri Dec 11, 2009 5:52 am
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leeanna13097 says...



I have a story called Written in Blood! It's romance fiction (though the prologue doesn't exactly have love in it). I'd REALLY love it if you would review it. Here's the link --> topic55433.html

BTW, it's just the prologue, so it doesn't exactly tell you what the story is ACTUALLY about; it just kind of gives you a glimpse of the past. One day soon I'll get the first chapter up, though!

Thanks!! :)
Please forgive me if I over-edit anything of yours.