Young Writers Society

I editted my first three chapters, and wrote more to it. I hope you guys like it! I need a lot of critisism please. And don;t worry, I won't flip ...

just to warn everyone, im not sure if this islyric poetry or not, so im sorry if i'm wrong. Also i have a problem with puncuation in poems, so please ...

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My eyes dripped tears down my hot cheeks. My face feels exactly like when I lean over to see what mom's dinner is. Too bad I can't be home. Die ...

Was it a dream, was it some fool game fate was playing on her? She didn’t know the reasons nor cared too much about knowing them, but it would have ...

I stalked through the forest, crashing through fern clumps and Elder bushes, being scratched by branches of thorn patches, nettles, and brambles. Somehow, I had always found myself circling back ...

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O prison cell, surrounding me with bars like burnished spears,In this silent tomb the echoes of my life are all I hear.The key was buried long ago, in the world ...

I was lying in the dark alone; the silence my only comfort. I was a prisoner in my mind constantly being reminded of the mess I have caused. My watch ...

The room was massive and dark. Huge, windowless, concrete walls rose up endlessly and uninterrupted and the few lights that were dotted around the room seemed to only to intensify ...

How can I be here without him?How can a coin be cut in half?How can love vanish, and leave me here alone?Why did my body not follow my heart?//I don’t ...

I Made this entire story up in my head, so I wrote it down. I plan to make it into 2 books.One book of Lefendor.One book of Meflin and his ...

I don’t know why, when my life’s on a low,When failures all I have got to show,When disappointments and fatigue are on the flow,I find success, just by sitting with ...

I had to write a piece which did not exceed 500 words, so that's why this is so short! I have talked to science students, and still am not sure ...

Hey ya'll! This is Sands of Time, I am trying a different style of writing for me, several different viewpoints and what not. Anyways, please help me correct errors, and ...