Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
In the 1960s,there was a woman named Enisa who was shopping for clothes at a boutique,called:"Eloise's boutique." She had brought her son over,Eddie,to come with her every time.
Sometimes,the store owner,Eloise,accused her precious Eddie of putting his snotty hands all over the clothes.Enisa couldn't understand why she would say those horrible things about him! What kind of woman would say that about a child?
But Eloise was...not like any other woman she had known and Enisa didn't like that.
Even though Enisa didn't like her,she still went to her boutique,because she had nice clothes and she liked getting the clothes she made.
One day when she went shopping,her son,Eddie,went missing in the store!
Enisa never found him,but while she lived,she often wondered what happened to him...
Okayy....well we're back with the extra short style it seems, although I suppose it is only fitting, considering it appears this woman does play a rather minor role in this story here, being the mother of the unfortunate soul that ends up murdered. I did feel though that you could have used soo much emotion in this one, since we did have a mother just lose their child here to a horrible murder.
The start here is fine. We get to see what the mother thinks of her son and the way Eloise did here complaining. We knew she was mistaken there, but then that is exactly what you expect a mother to think here when some random lady makes an accusation like that. The whole clothes reason for continuing to come back is also shaky but acceptable, its the end though that seems like it could be so much more.
There you seem to gloss over the fact that this mother just accepts here child is missing and lets it remain a mystery to here. I understand it being a mystery and perhaps these sisters doing something to ensure that the child's body doesn't go back to the mother, it seems like a more humane option at any rate for a mother to not have to see the mangled murdered body of their child, but I still think we should see more emotions here at the idea of it missing, rather than simply ending with this one line.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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