always too far
and too silent
i learned how to love from a distance
never enough
is this violence?
in this drought one small word’s an oasis
i keep waiting for someone to find
all the love that i leave let implied
unsatisfied
in this dry land
still we learn to survive, low supplying
starving our hearts
on this white sand
we swallow it up while we still can
i keep waiting for someone to find
all the love that i leave left implied
learned how to love off of nothing
think it’s why i would starve to feel something
my appetite 's nonexistent
all these waves leave me sick to my stomach
i keep waiting for someone to find
all the love that i leave left implied
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