The moon shepherdess
slarlight, starbright
sheep of the moon
thy wool on a spool
of thy shepherdess lady
she wears her hair open
braided with stars
her dress she laced
with skybound maps
on her arm she holds
a newborn lamb
its eyes two galaxies
here new worlds sleep
her faithful companions
thunder and lightning
herd the stars
I wrote this after I had finished reading a book by terry pratchett, in which there is talk about a china shepherdess. I hope you like it, please review it!
~sheepy
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