Hello! FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day! And to help get your work out the green room!
Let's start.
So how funny is it that I am leaving a review on a review? XD I didn't think I would be doing this while I was here on YWS, but here goes nothing.
So you have told me a lot about this book and i am very interested to go get it and have a look at it. The plot of the story seems to be well thought out, although I would have liked you to go more into that, like the parts in the book that were a little gory, give me a little insight on that, you are reviewing a book here so you have to add as much detail into the review as you can to get your point across.
Now the way you you persevered Celestine's character was really good, I got the feeling she's strong and it capable of doing anything. And I do want to get to know her better.
Now this flawed thing you were talking about i know you talked about it a lot already, but I can't help but want to know more about it, so maybe try and add a little more into that aspect being that it is like the whole story.
But I think you become a reviewer of other people's stories one day, I think you are off to a great start, and I think I will go check out this book soon. I hope I will get to read more of your stuff soon, so never stop writing and have a great day or night.
Your friend
FlamingPhoenix!
Reviewing with a fiery passion!
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