The world of school is very harsh and cold
In this place, those who can handle it show
The ones who do, they must be strong and bold
Without these folks, the system cannot flow
Someone took this on, they were very tough
They were different, one though to be strong
Someone who could stand, even through the rough
But in this new place, they would not last long
They struggled hard for one specific class
A class where they might be able to learn
They fought with the school, pushing through the mass
The person almost won that class they yearn
In the end, they did not win, it was done
Someone else got the class, good, go have fun...
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kill the last two lines...rewrite them.
both of these lines have such forced rhymes that is pained me