Hey there! Uni here for a review.
How are you doing? Hope you are fine.
Sorry for not reviewing this earlier!
I'm so excited to be back and start reviewing your poem! Hope you're doing well today or tonight, depending on what side of the world you're on.
Not a very long poem but deep emotions, I must say. I can relate to the poem very well. And I know most of us can relate to the words and feelings you have put in this literary work.
So let us start.
This poem is amazing and relatable for everyone.
I loved the rhyming scheme and seriously, it didn’t look like you just wanted to rhyme the lines. It is looking like it has come naturally from deep inside your heart.
Writing a good poem and rhyming it as well is a difficult feat and you have achieved it.
Overall, I like the theme as less poets write on the s
Maybe you can use capital letters for the beginning of lines. That way it would look nice . Whether you use capital letters or not, your poem remains fantasic just as you are as a poet.
Anyway, it is a suggestion . I am here just for a review. You do whatever you like . Believe me, No offence.
I just noticed something after the reading the poem twice that you left your cursor in the middle of the photo. That was unintentional, though.
I loved the theme of the story as less poets write on social issues. The part when mother realised that her son is gay is emotional. How she came out to be so understanding is learn able.
Have a nice day and keep posting.
Points: 25
Reviews: 6
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