Teenager

by caitlynnoco

Published January 24, 2016

E - Everyone

In Poetry

On the brink of blessed innocence

and wretched maturity

lies the hope of a nation.

Like the first songbird in the morning,

waking the new day,

they are the fresh eyes of the world.

When light knows no boundaries,

and darkness is prepared

to devour every defenseless depth,

their heart is ripe for reaping.

Shrouded by darkness,

and cloaked in invisibility,

they suffocate in sorrow.

Whose lives seemed so trivial,

they are grieved over exorbitantly

when taken from their predecessors' arms.

Sometimes not even old enough to drive a car,

they are matured enough to

deliver new light into the world,

fight for what they believe in,

change corruption or good intentions,

and, most dishearteningly of all,

depose of themselves permanently.

And even then,

like innumerable treacherous beasts,

crawling out of the depths of Hell,

all of humanity towers against them.

And, when the future of the Earth

lies upon their shoulders,

the gravity of their existence

is hardly remembered.

A small flicker,

a flash,

a flare,

a flame,

a torch,

a wildfire,

thrown into a tidal wave

of desolation and self-worth

A human being.

A heart, body, and soul.

A teenager who wonders,

How is my speck of an existence,

soon to be lost in the fabrics of time,

to be considered of value?

What is the cure for such

allusions of worthlessness

and misguided nihilism?

With words cold and callous and harsh,

depriving of oxygen,

eclipsing of light,

leeching of energy,

and terrorizing of hope,

they know no other way of life.

The teenager is his own worst enemy.

Comments & reviews · 3
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7whitewolf7
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7whitewolf7 commented Comment · Jan 25, 2016

Keep it exactly the way it is. :)
That is all I have to say.
On this fine sunlit day.
For this that speaks to us kids.
(Thumbs up!)

DivergentDemigod wrote a review Review · Jan 24, 2016

Dear caitlynnoco,
This piece of literature of yours is really remarkable ....it perfectly describes the situation of most of the teenagers in this huge world-specially me-.....you have really put a great effort in this poem....the choice of words you have made......is AMAZING....the small flicker.a flash.a flame.a torch.a wildfire......its really thaughtfull to use these words....I really am flattered by they way you can put the whole perspective of mylife in just a few paragraphs.....I'm sure you would have scored an A for such an amusing poem......

With all my respect and love,

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allyoop
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allyoop wrote a review Review · Jan 24, 2016

I think most readers can definitely relate to this on a personal level. This piece was wonderfully worded and beautifully constructed. Your verb choice especially caught my attention ( terrorizing, leeching, suffocate, crawling, etc.). Every word was nicely strung together to create this. Loved it! Keep writing!



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