Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm Knight Hardy here on a mission to ensure that all works on YWS has at least two reviews. You will probably never see this but....Imma do this anyway.
Anyway let's get right to it,
In Elysium, you have no freedom. Where you work, what class you will live in and who you will love is all Selected for you by the government. Eighteen-year old Cassiopeia Lorena dreads her final Selection, she knows that she will never be paired with Orion Mastra, her childhood sweetheart, but instead sent to the city. As she awaits an unknown future, Cassiopeia copes with tragic changes as well as startling news. When she finds that nothing is as it seems in an unjust society, she is faced with life changing decisions: Will she choose to fight Elysium or will she agree to abide by the laws?
Hmm, so we have what is essentially a blurb right here, and well this is actually pretty nicely done here, you've captured the essence of a summary like this one quite well. It seems like we have ourselves one of those dystopian future societies where the government ends up separating for reason X and that leads to all sorts of chaos cause one person doesn't like it and well, while I have a read a couple of these, I do like it.
Now, looking at what makes your thing unique here, the biggest thing that's unique to me is the selecting who you love thing, because that is a pretty strong motivator there not to mention that looks like the government is trying to do something selective breeding with humans, which is a really interesting path to walk down...so yeah, as far as that goes, I'd say don't worry too much, cause that is a really interesting idea.
The idea that its just her fighting against a government seems unlikely so I'm assuming there's to be some kind of rebellious group, but then if you do go with just her that'd be another fairly big difference from most stories of this type. It'd be harder to come up with a plot that way, but it will be much more unique. Well, you know from what I glean here, this does seem like something I'd read.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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