Well, This is Awkward: Loud Singing

HAHAHA funny story thanks for sharing with us. those types of things happen to me constantly. Try talking to someone for 5 minutes at a computer then realize its not who you thought they were after they turn to you with a look that purely says, "I feel bad that you're so stupid. Really I do." my response: "Well that was embarrassing I thought you were someone else because they like horses too. the worst part is I can't move because I need to print this paper."

Hi abelgaiya, I'm here with a review. I really like your story it's funny, and relatable. There aren't many mistakes, but you wrote an instead of and in the line

The girl was staring at me in utter bewilderment. An then I said,

You also used I instead of it on this line

I was then that something abstract stung me (could have been my adam’s apple), and my intelligence began to draw out from my work.

One more mistake I spotted was your use of the word sand instead of sang.

Besides these little mistakes I really did enjoy your story very much.

Hey, let me review this.
I found it interesting as i myself share every bit of interesting event or stupid mistake i make. As a writer criticizing yourself and laughing upon your own stupid mistakes bring out the best humor, getting others involved.
However, i still feel by adding up a few more things , may be additional from what actually happened, would have increased the length and made it more humorous.
I have some issue with this line, and believe could have been better
'The side which everyone has but only reveals itself occasionally'
The word reveal sounds sophisticated, try changing it with some phrase or another word.
Again, as you mention the intelligent and dumb side, talking of them together would have brought out the real fun of it.
One more thing , was there just a girl who noticed you or its just her who was noticeable to you, since you were singing loud, try covering such points too.
Anyways i enjoy reading such things and look forward to more.
Keep enjoying and sharing such stuff

Hello here I am for a little review.

OK now personally you did really well about some mystery at the end but something that i noticed in particularly was (When the intelligent side of your brain is completely devoured, there remains only the dumb side of you. The side which everyone has but only reveals itself occasionally. In addition to the emanation of your dumb side, your senses become non-receptive. This means that you don’t see, hear or feel your environment. Smelling and tasting are still functional because there are certain types of smell that the nose is just not impervious to (like farts...just to be specific); and there are certain heavenly aromas which make the stomach rumble in expectation) see I can't see why you put this there in the first place.

And another thing you might need to make your story bigger.

Any way that's what I think and i also think your grammar is really good and so is your spelling.

Keep writing and good luck.

~Jon~