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Hi there
Just going to do a little review here. Colliding is spelled with 2 l's.
Surrounded is 2 r's, vessel is 2 e's.
I'm having a little trouble following the random punctuation, some lines are capitalized, others not, and there are few commas or periods.
I love the theme of the ocean, the eternal struggle and battle against nature, and human trying, but failing, to conquer its random and detached harshness. Its one of my favorites in my own poetry and you have conveyed it well here. Its a great poem and thank you for writing it!