Hi, this is ZeldaIsShiek here for another review on a poem about unhealthy relationships and parties with excessive drinking for some reason! I really like what you did with this poem, so I'm excited to be reviewing it. I can't relate to this whatsoever, as I am responsible and antisocial and have no intention of drinking anything worse for you than fruit juice for the next 20 years. I can't even relate to wanting to go to a party, but I'll review it the best I can, so let's start!
I really thought that this poem was a true work of art that should be appreciated for the fact that it is both a public service announcement and some friendly advice. It seems like you may have been in this situation yourself once, though I kind of doubt a great poet like you would be so irresponsible. The next thing I have to add to this review is how it is a very well-written story as well as a poem, expressing the dangers of both partying too much and being irresponsible. What is the difference between the twp, exactly? Partying too much isn't always irresponsible depending on the circumstances, but being irresponsible is always... irresponsible? Nevermind... What matters is that you very accurately described late High School parties and how it is very dangerous to be drinking underage. It is amazing how you drew the connection between underage drinking and other destructive decisions to ruining your future.
Great work, and as always, have a happy Review Day! ZeldaIsShiek- Out!
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