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Chapter Seven: The Waiting Game

It’s been three days since I found the hidden keypad, and I don’t know how I’ve managed to keep away from it.

I’ve walked past that hallway at least a dozen times. I’ve stared at the seam in the wall, the little panel blinking quietly behind the bookshelf. But I haven’t touched it. Not once.

Not because I didn’t want to.

It’s been gnawing at me like am itch I can’t scratch. Every time I sit still, my thoughts wander back to it. Every time I close my eyes, I picture the keypad blinking at me like it knows something I don’t. It’s like the thing has teeth, and it's sunk them into the back of my brain.

I would’ve gone back sooner, but Uncle Max had made sure I barely had enough energy to breathe, let alone sneak around. Between sunrise runs, exercise drills, and memorizing ciphers until my eyes blurred, he’d kept me mentally and physically wrung out.

Today’s torture: fire-building. Without matches.

“You’re going to freeze to death in the field if you can’t get this right,” Uncle Max had barked, tossing me a chunk of flint and a knife. My fingers are still blistered.

Now I’m lying on my bed, staring out the window as the sun slips behind the trees. The room is soaked in golden light, long shadows stretching across the floor. My mind drifts — again — to the keypad.

What kind of normal person installs a keypad in their house? And behind a locked door, no less?

Not a normal person. That’s the point. Uncle Max has to be more than ex-military. The drills, the constant discipline — it’s not just ex-soldier behaviour. It’s something else. Something he’s not saying.

And I’ve spent enough time in hacker forums to know that anything hidden is probably worth finding.

Still, I haven’t asked Uncle Max about it. I don’t know why.

Maybe I’m scared of the answer. Or scared he’ll lie.

Or maybe… I want to solve it myself.

I get up, stretch, and glance at the clock.

6:47 p.m.

Through the window, I could see Uncle Max outside, still chopping wood — part of his evening routine. He always took his time, spacing out each swing like it’s some kind of meditation. I’d started tracking his habits three days ago, writing them down in the corner of my training notebook. He chops until 7:05. Then showers. Then tea. Every night like clockwork.

I knew I had maybe fifteen minutes, twenty if I was lucky.

My heart thuds once, heavy and slow, as I sit up and cross the room. I move quietly, careful not to disturb the loose floorboard by the door. At the shelf, I slip my fingers behind the worn spines and remove the books one by one.

There it is — the faint outline in the wall. The keypad, blinking silently beneath.

I hesitate. Then press a button.

The screen lit up blue.

Okay, here goes nothing.

I type in Uncle Max’s birthday. Denied.

His military ID number from the dog tag on his desk. Denied.

The date I arrived here. Denied.

I try again — the year his old army unit was disbanded. My own birthday, just in case.

All wrong.

The keypad blinks red with each failure, and with every rejection, my frustration deepens. I’d been so sure one of them would work. I’d been watching, asking questions, fishing for anything that might help. “What year did you buy this place?” “Did you always want to join the military?” “What’s your favourite number?”

I tried all of them. Nothing.

I grit my teeth and step back.

Reaching into my pocket, I pull out a hair-thin thread of clear tape that I had cut and pocketed earlier. The kind you could barely see if you didn’t know it was there. I press a sliver along the edge of one of the buttons, just enough that if someone else typed something in, it would wrinkle or shift.

Then I nudge a few books back into place, leaving the rest just slightly askew — the way only I would know.

Then I slip out of the hallway and pad softly back to my room, careful to avoid the squeaky board near the bathroom door. The house is quiet, just the hum of crickets outside and the ticking of the old clock in the living room.

I’m almost to my room when I hear it.

A creak.

Not mine.

Not any board I stepped on.

Just one sound — quick and sharp — like pressure shifting on an old floorboard a few steps behind me.

I stop breathing, skin prickling with the sense of being watched.

Slowly, I glance over my shoulder.

Nothing.

The hallway is empty. Shadows stretch along the floor, long and still. No movement. No sound.

But I know I didn’t imagine it.

My heart pounds harder now. Louder than my footsteps.

I move faster, silently slipping into my room and easing the door shut behind me.

Click.

Then I stand there, back pressed to the wood, listening.

Waiting.

But nothing comes.

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Tikaya wrote a review · Sat Feb 14, 2026 9:07 pm

Heya Sana, I was looking forward to this! But that doesn’t change that I’m also here for a glorious Violet Victory!


Already we are starting with a less than strong start. Why phrase it like “idk how I didn’t do the cool thing” as your very first sentence? ☹

The second paragraph is much better. And I like how you describe the itch to go there and do it =D

This feels a bit clunky with the double “had” in this sentence: “but Uncle Max had made sure I barely had enough energy to breathe”

Starting a fire without modern help is a very useful thing to know *nods sagely in “my characters went through that too”*

I think it’s Nova’s natural secrecy that keeps her from talking about it with Max. He’s also not exactly being a forthcoming guy and she can probably guess he’s not gonna outright tell her. I also like the idea that he secretly wants her to find this, the final test. I am so pumped for this outcome~

I hope Nova is gonna learn to write her notes in code. I would love the idea of Max knowing that she keeps a notebook but I also would love it if he doesn’t break into the teenage girl’s bedroom to check her stuff. In me truly do live two wolves…
I also want to note that Nova now has been swinging axes too, has she not learnt this meditative quality about the work? XD

Ohh I also like that the social engineering part of hacking gets a mention, with her probing Max for info. Guess she needs to go secret hunting.

“leaving the rest just slightly askew — the way only I would know.“ Are you sure, Nova, that the more-than-ex-military guy will not notice that you have disturbed something? oô

Oh I love how the chapter ends. I felt the suspense creep up on me too. That is just perfect tension building. You made me very happy now that I read this :3

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Heyy! I genuinely love reading your thoughts so thank you so much for this review.

Nova can%u2019t open the door just yet (there will be a time when she needs to) and I wasn't really sure what explanation to give so I wrote "It%u2019s been three days since I found the hidden keypad, and I don%u2019t know how I%u2019ve managed to keep away from it." as my starting but I'll see what I can do about it.

[quote]I hope Nova is gonna learn to write her notes in code/quote]
This is SUCH a brilliant idea. The wheels in my brain are already turning. I can do so much with that little detail. Ahhh thank you!!

And unfortunately, nope. Nova does NOT like cutting wood. She finds it boring, repetitive, and mostly just exhausting. No meditative axe wisdom for her (yet).

And yes%u2026 Nova might be slightly overconfident about the whole %u201Conly I would know%u201D thing. Let's just say she is still learning that she is not the only observant person in that house (Uncle Max definitely knows what she is up to).

Thanks again for such a thoughtful review! :smt049

Ans P.S: Victory shall be ours!! (I say even when I know you're going to beat us).

Ooo, this was an interesting read!

Now for the review!

First off, I like that this is written in a first-person style. I've tried, and failed, to write my stories in first person. But you're doing great with it!

I couldn't find any errors or typos in this. It is an interesting read and I'm curious to see where this story goes.

Keep writing, my friend! You're doing great!



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