Published March 16, 2008
Lookin Back On My Life, I Gotta Ask, Were My Choices Right? The Decisions Too. If I Could Go Back, Change It All, You Think I Should? I Guess I Would. But Since I Can't I Gotta Accept, My Mistakes I've Made And Just Move On, Live The Life That I Am In.
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use your imagination guys.
you've gotta rap it.
still kinda poor and lazy with the rhymes and well..the whole idea.
but if you rap it, it at leasts has funniness going for it.
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Yeah same as above, your format is a tad strange. Ummm... I have to admit I didn't really like this poem but maybe it's just me. It's very clichéd. Maybe you could perhaps express your ideas a little more originally?
I think when you wrote the poem, your formatting didn't come the way you intended it to look like. ^^ Perhaps you can edit it so it looks like you originally intended it to be?
Um... this wasn't really my kind of poem. Especially since it's written the way it is. You capitialized things that you really didn't need to. If you read it like I did it sort of would have sounded somewhat like a cheer.
I wasn't sure how to crit this...