Yes, we all do it.
Something that comes naturally with life.
Hard to escape, for you are easily captured.
We all hate it.
Feels wrong, we know that it is.
Sin is what makes us human.
You can't just wrestle yourself free from it's grasp.
Liars might say that they don't but,
What they are sadly miss informed about is that,
You do somethings without even noticing it.
If it happens, hate not yourself,
Realize your flaws but know everyone has them.
Try to change it a little,
Not too much, for fear of changing ones self.
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First of all, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see you here.
The topic is interesting, because sin is an interesting topic. It can be so JUICY. Still, this is kind of preachy. Don't just tell us what to do -- show us an example we can learn from that can also touch our lives. It'll be much better that way.
And it'll make it more juicy. And we love juice!