Hi!
I like how it went. Morbid when you take it in a symbolized way. The plot was strangely interesting. The ending's a bit hanging and insightful. Nice symbolism. A slice of life poetry. This really happens for some people. The parents are having a hard time earning money but still spend for unnecessities, and children not listening to their parents doing otherwise what they were told not to do. It's really unhealthy for a family to have such conflict reason (regarding with family income where uncertainty will be setting in about the future) and truth be told, others ended up like the lobster girl. I very much like it. It was nicely written using one's own writing style. Looking forward for more good reads. Keep it cool.
Points: 326
Reviews: 2
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