Wow. That's it. That's the review. Wow.
This story was devastatingly beautiful. I love the way you incorporate this panic and endless ache of grief through the "in and out" portion. This constant attempt to calm herself and gather peace that seems impossible to reach.
The flashback was also a beautiful portion. I love the line: "The sea always returns to the shore". Beautiful.
Another one of my favorite lines:
Now, glaring at the broken chain of waves, the sea was still here though her mother was not.
I love this line so much. This grief and this association with things we love with things we've lost.
What I also love so much about this story is that she doesn't despise the ocean for associating it with her mother. Instead, she sees the ugliness it offers and understands this balance in life of beauty and pain. It's such an important balance and also shows the stage of grief she is in. There is no anger in this story, only pain, loss, and also a hint of hope and you conveyed that beautifully.
Well, I realize there are no critiques in this review, and that is because I have nothing to critique on. Wonderful writing!
mordax
Points: 391
Reviews: 89
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