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Wow, I was unaware that you were such a good writer, Hei... And what the yet-to-be poet said... A very amusing work
Thank you so much Drak, that's what I like about you, you know how to appreciate real piece
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umm... did it not post?
Note: What is written beyond this point is completly sarcastic.
I love the illusion factor in this story. Or, is it a poem? One will never know. That's what I love about this! The emptiness of it really represents the emptiness inside us all, doesn't it? Perhaps you could write a sequel that can fill that emptiness.
In a strange way, this reminds me of the Amish dolls. You know, the one's with no face? Yes, those! They make them with no face so as not to create a false image, give pride to one with similar features, and not offend anyone who doesn't look like it. A story with no words cannot affend anyone, can it? Very good! I look forward to more invisible writings!
Note: The sarcastic part is over.
Sincerly,
~~Heidi~~
you just made me laugh! XD yesh, this is actually the same to the invisible art of James Franko----- that sold sacks of dollars! Be glad I posted it here for free!!
Anyways, this is a mess post and its just---there is no delete button, so yeah! XD the real post is HERE work.php?id=95832