Young Writers Society

Hi I am Grace and here to review your work
First of all i loved it so much it was artistic, this is my first time seeing such a artistic piece of work like this. It is different like and it inspires me, I have never heard or should i say read the exact words that you wrote. I specially loved the part where it says that you have to sleep to travel miles. I really love how you telling the truth and relating to how life is. I know a lot of people who work hard but still have nothing.

Well i have not found a way but i do believe that everyone has a destination and i feel like God has planned how and what we going to have to go through just to reach our destination. The main thing is to always find a way to make it to your destination. At the end it is worth it, like me i have gone through a lot in life even though i am just a teenager i have lost my way but i was determined to find my way and i found it. As people we should not dream to find a job but to create jobs because the population is increasing every time, which means unemployment is rising to.

There are also people who help us to get to our destination it is just hard to find them, in my view or how i think i want to find my way out. Is to know what i want, what is holding me back and where i want to be in life. Everyone has a story and everyone has a purpose,there are few things i am still dealing with to help me find my way out. I just thought of something wait ok the road only ends when you die. Then after that then starts your endless road in my belief but before that there are destinations we have to reach. I do know my road will end i do not know when but all i know is all i have to do is never disappoint myself i any way.

That is my opinion and how i see things

Anywhere carry on writing i love your work and can not wait to read more of your work.

Its nice and meaningful
And this topic is really important to understand.

Its nice and meaningful
And this topic is really important to understand.

I know the way off the endless road!

Hi may_pathak!

After reading the ending note, I feel I'm also in a need to find that way out. I can relate to your words because I think I'm also walking down an endless road. I'm aware what's gonna come my way if I continue like this, but maybe I'm not able to find that zeal that could encourage me to keep walking and not getting lost.

I agree with you that just working hard in life without any aim is just futile. What is required in it to complete those efforts is a purpose. The connection of life with an endless road felt apt here. The message of this piece can be felt to be of great importance in real life.

Don't want to sound nitpicking here but I think there are places you can make certain changes to make them sound more correct.
"we are humans with a purpose", I think if you change it to 'we became humans with a purpose' it fits better with the flow.

"now they sleeps", will be sleep.

Aren't you're tired with watching motivation again n again and listening to every shitty things people say and finally when they end up saying

Good

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