Hey there!
Nice work.I couldn't even imagine that someone would write something like this about a bee.The way you have presented the poem is also impressive,yellow and black.
The second stanza is amazing and presents a great visual imagery.Sound imagery is great in the first stanza.I think you could work a little on the rhyming scheme.If the rhyming scheme is intentional then it's great.Great poem and it really presents nice sound and meaning.
I hope you keep writing such amazing poemsđ.
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