I stood watchful under the blanket of night,
the grass cold against my heels,
the sweet fragrance enticing me
over to the willow; there shaded under,
Lady of the night-
made to bloom in the dark.
Screams, fused with howling winds,
over the tree, terror grew, like unkempt vines;
the warning hoot of the owl was heard
as she began to whisper to the sky.
The pain, the wounds, the sorrows
The Sky embraced her with open arms,
wound a necklace of shimmering stars around her neck,
Encircling her around a sheet of darkness,
He had done the same to the Moon
each night, cradling it, consuming it
into the silent void.
And like the moon she, too, let it swallow her up-
bit by bit the sky possessed her lustre,
till the murky black made her gasp
like a mute nightingale struggling to break free
from the inky mist-
around her neck the shackles of stars glimmered-
glimmered like the crescent moon,
her beacon of hope;
the moon had battled with the shadowy pitch,
unbound itself from the suffocating terror,
returningto its silvery glow
Now, it was her turn to shine in the darkness, the flower amongst fallen trees.
The Lady of the Night.
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Wow! This poem hits very close to home for me. I am absolutely terrified of the night out my window, but for some reason I absolutely love it. I am terrified of the night (not dark) but when I am out there and the moon is shining full I love it! My cousins, brother, mother and I were walking home and my eldest cousin (she is one year older than me) and I began a conversation about the night. We agreed that we love it. Good poem!
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ^-^
This was a beautiful poem. ^-^
Third line from the bottom, you forgot to separate "returning" and "to".
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Thank you!