Don't come here now for sunshine and warmth.
Don't come here now for good cheer round the hearth. <--- I would delete this stanza, because it really doesn't add a lot to the poem.
I advise to steer clear of this whole campus. <--- I like how long and convoluted it sounds! Very academia like, though I think you can overexaggerate this and make it even better.
The professors have driven the students to madness. <-- Explain how.
Finals are here.
Awful weather joins to. <--- Edit your post so it says "too."
My advice to you. <--- Put a colon where there is a period.
Don't come round here now.
Funny stuff!
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