Warning: This work has been rated 18+ for language, violence, and mature content.
Chapter 3
Year 2000…………
“Ooo, boss you don’t look so good.” A voice hissed out of the dark.
A little chuckle broke out as a pair of black pupils appeared. “Don’t talk like Igtytous didn’t fuck up to my pet…… you have a couple of burn marks on your body too.” The black eyes laughed as an evil grin broke out of the darkness under the black eyes.
“Well if you ask me I think those burn marks make you look awfully tough……and all women are turned on to tough looking guys.” A women voice said as it skipped across the dark room.
The black pupils then rested on a pair of ocean blue eyes that sat right across from it. “Well now Deception, you just made me feel better about me. How about you come over here and let me give you a gift you will never forget?” The mouth under the black pupils asked.
“Now Jr. I have respect for you but that’s my property and she knows that. After all she let me mark on her.” Another voice spoke from the above.
The black eyes looked up and seen a pair of wine color eyes peering down back at him.
“Kronos, I never meant to offend you. I just thought that you was willing to share since after all, you offered your brother her. You said he can hit anytime he wants.” The mouth under the black eyes smiled.
“Yea but that’s for me and my brother not a second party.” Another voice behind the black eyes said.
The black eyes turned around to another pair of wine eyes. “Well Canos, we were just talking about you friend. Nothing but good things.” The mouth under the black eyes surrendered.
“I heard.” The second pair of wine eyes answered back. That’s when the second pair of wine eyes felt a hand touch his shoulder and grip it. The eyes turned around and looked approximately 4 feet above him to a pair of sky blue eyes.
“Do we have a problem?” The second pair of wine eyes snared.
The sky blue eyes just looked down at the second pair of wine color eyes.
“Hey guys calm down. It’s plenty of Deception to go around. I can handle all of you. The ocean blue eyes protested as the right eye winked at them.
“She is right, so Jugo calm down big fellow and let Canos go.” The mouth under the black pupils asked the sky blue eyes.
The sky blue eyes let the second pair of wine eyes go.
“Perfect well now let’s figure out what we are about to do.” The black eyes said to everyone in the room.
“Master Satan, we should go after your brother for burning you like that.” The sky blue eyes suggested as he kneeled down and put his hand over his chest and bowed his head.
“Well now that is not a bad idea Jugo but before we go after him I have a different agenda to attend to first.” The black eyes answered back.
“Well what is it?” The ocean blue eyes asked with curiously.
“Well first let me ask, where is your little brother Bain?” The black eyes asked.
“He is right here.” The Ocean blue eyes said.
“Good, cause we need him here if we going to infiltrate Nirvana.” The black eyes said with an evil grin.
That’s when a loud thump came down as the first pair of wine eyes was closely to the black eyes.
“Infiltrate heaven……are you fucking crazy, if we do that then we will need to go up against Hercules and his crew or worst, Gabriel and that damn Michel or God’s wrath which is twice as bad.” The first of wine eyes proclaim.
The black eyes laughed out loud for talking. “You sound like a little bitch. I thought the great Kronos was the king of all beasts not a bitch.”
The first pair of wine eyes roared angrily.
“Look as far as Michel and Gabriel go Bain will handle them. His Angelic magic is if not equal then damn near powerful enough to buy us time to get to Nirvana.” The Black eyes reinsured the first pair wine eyes.
“That is true.” The blue ocean eyes agreed.
“Okay that’s just one problem, we still got two more problem. “ The second pair of wine eyes spoke up.
“What; are you talking about that punkass Hercules and his group of weakass angels?” The black eyes asked.
“They can’t be so weak that even this core group has struck fear into your father’s army.” The first pair of wine eyes retaliated.
“I believe we can handle them. Heck we got one thing that they don’t and that’s an eight foot one giant name Jugo.” The black eyes said as they pointed to the sky blue eyes.
“That is also true.” The ocean blue eyes said agreeing to what the black eyes said.
“And god’s wrath?” The first pair of wine eyes asked.
A yawn broke across the dark room as all eyes turn to a pair of canary yellow eyes. “As far as your fear of god’s wrath, let me handle that.” The Canary yellow eyes protested.
“Well then let’s go pay my grandfather a visit in Nirvana shall we.” The Black eyes said as another evil smile broke out under it.
Later in the day on earth……
Churches began to be sat on fire, as people ran in fear and terror. That’s when both Michel and Gabriel appeared. When they got there they saw a little boy with a black hood over his face and a pair of baggy sweat pants on.
Gabriel smiled and asked, “Hey Michel is that our old student Bain?”
Michel big brown eyes connected with Bain's ocean blue eyes that hid underneath his hood.
The three was in a dead lock stare down, when Bain mouthed out a couple of words. That’s when a blade appeared in Bain’s hand as his angel wings spread out wide. They flapped hard once as he mouth out the word’s “God speed.” He charged at Michel and swung his blade. Michel put up his blade to block the attack. His block was successful but after a couple of seconds Michel eyes rolled in the back of his head as he began to plummet faster than rock being pulled back to earth by its gravity. He crashed into the building under him as people yelled as he fell to the bottom of the building.
“Moran, did he really forget the power of your Banshee amhránaíocht. You may have chosen to fight with a weapon like him but you chose my magic to copy. This is why I cannot see how he didn’t see that attack coming.” Gabriel said as he shook his head.
Gabriel and Bain then exchange looks as neither moved.
In Nirvana that day……
“Hey Quience, come here quick.” A guard angle called to another angel that was on guard duty.
“What, Abraham.” Quience asked as he came over to Abraham.
Abraham gave the telescope to Quience. Quience looked out the telescope and seen 6 being coming towards the gate.
“We have to go and ring the alarm!” Quience yelled. He turned to Omanga squeezing Abraham to death. He tried to fly away but Omanga stretched out and opened his mouth wide as he snapped his jaws quickly. He decapitated Quience then swallowed Abraham whole. He opened the gate as he let in the six being. We still haven’t been discovered yet.” Omanga said as he bowed his head.
“Is that so? Well let’s see if we can change that.” Satan Jr. smiled as him and his crew entered Nirvana.
“Okay Canos and Kronos I need yawl to go and start causing a little chaos, while I and these pretty women, Omanga, and Jugo of course go and meet up with my grandfather. After yawl are done letting all of Nirvana know that we are here meet me back at Castle Heaven. Understood?” Satan Jr. asked.
“Yes.” The two best roared together as they took off and started to attack the souls in Nirvana.
A couple minutes later……
(You can hear children and women scream in terror.)
“What is going on?” God asked one of his angels as he began to get off his thrown. That’s when Satan Jr. kicked open Castle Haven’s door open.
“Well hello grandfather.” Satan Jr. sang as he entered the throne room.
Angel guards pointed arrows at the demon. Satan Jr. just smiled as Deception did her wave and kissed at all the guards in there.
God looked at the demon with anger.
“Why is there a demon in my Heaven?” God asked as he slammed his hand down on the arm of his thrown.
“Why grandfather I am so appalled that you just see me as another demon, but then again you might not know how I am.” Satan Jr. said as he began to grin.
“Tsk, I knew who you was when you walked in here…You got your fathers face. I guess that is why the name Junior fits you so well Satan Jr.” God said.
“Well now the old man was good looking back in his youth if I look like him.” Satan Jr. laughed. He then held out his hand and Deception grabbed it. She smiled as she walked up and stood beside Satan Jr. She had on a blue dress with silver earrings. Her Ocean blue eyes rest on the gigantic man who sat on the throne. “Well grandfather I want you to meet a very important woman in my life. I hope you will give us your blessing. Satan Jr. smiled.
God looked at Satan with an irritated look.
“This is-““I already know Isabella.” God said as he cut off Satan Jr.
“Isabella?” Satan Jr. asked as he looked at Deception with a confused look on his face.
Deception just smiled and said, “Isabella, I haven’t been called by that name for a while know. I forgot that is what my parents had named me.”
“Of course you would….it didn’t fit you like Deception right. After all you are better at deceiving people……tricking them into doing things that you want them to do. Changing good little boys into killers.” God Chided.
Deception just smiled for a moment for speaking. “Well great father one I never deceive any boy to do anything. I just persuaded them that that was there true wants, which if it wasn’t then they shouldn’t have done it right?”
“Yea, right like you didn’t use your looks and sexual persuasion to get them to kill their families, steal or cheat other beings.” God snorted.
“Well then great father maybe you shouldn’t have made me so beautiful.” Deception snickered.
“Beautiful? I don’t see anything that is beautiful about you. Your heart is so black that it is repulsive for me to even look at you.” God fumed.
“Is that right? Well I wonder what Bain thinks I look like?” Deception smiled as she shrugged her shoulders up.
“You evil little girl……I still can’t believe you did to your little brother. You used sexual appeals and his love for you to make him kill yawl parents. He was only nine.” God preached as a tear fell from one of his eyes.
“Aw are you crying cause you truly feel sorry for my little brother or is it cause after all you did, sent me to hell, reunited him with our parents here in Nirvana, and even gave a place your royal platoon, serve under two of your upmost best Angels he still choose me over you.” Deception asked as she poked her lip out.
“You do not care. Your little brother is just another tool to you and as long as you are here in this world he will always follow you. Therefor I have made the decision I should have been made. I will wipe your exists from this world.” God said as he stood up.
“God ultimate spell, god’s wrath!” God said as he stretched his hand out and pointed it at both Satan Jr. and Deception. But nothing happen. God looked puzzled for a moment as he looked at his hands.
“What’s a matter gramps…..won’t going to wipe us from this world?” Satan Jr. mocked as a smile came across his face.
“I do not understand.” God mumbled as he looked at his hand.
“You can’t use God magic cause of my Titian arte, God authority cancellation.” A voice said from above.
God look up and seen a women floating above his head. She had the Canary yellow eyes. She then floated down to face level with god and looked him dead in his eyes.
“Who are you?” God asked.
“I am Queen Titian and I am here to exterminate you.”
God pissed off now went to go and swing on Queen Titian but his arm was stopped in midair. The tiny woman held gods gigantic fist with just a finger. She then put her hand on the hilt of her blade and said “Titian arte, god slasher.”
She then unsheathed her blade and swung it as a bright flash came from the blade and god went flying through the wall of castle heaven. “I will take care of your grandfather while you get what you came to get Satan Jr.” Queen Titan cited as she floated towards and out the giant whole god left in the wall after falling out of it.
“Yes thank you my queen.” Satan Jr. said as he bowed his head down.
All the angel knights looked in terror as none of them moved.
A giant smile crept across Satan Jr. face.
“Come on now don’t be shy someone come swing.” Satan Jr. teased the Angel knights.
“Aw, look at them cowering with fear they don’t even want to move. I told you we should have not brought Queen Titian with us. Now look at what she did the Angel knights don’t even want to fight.” Deception pouted.
That’s when a voice from out the Angel knights group spoke. “If you all are to cowardly to attack the enemy who thrash your home then allowed me to attack.”
That’s when you heard a mighty neigh immerged from behind a group of angel knights. They moved and a white horse trotted forward.
Omanga put his head down a shook it. “Damn it not this idiot again.”
The man on the white horse had on all white armor as he got down. This time he took the helmet off though. He was a black man with long dreads.
“Whoa, he’s black?!” Omanga said as he looked with shock.
“Not just a black man but a cute black man.” Deception said as she waived at the angel who got off the horse.
“Tsk black yes, cute…..well I don’t see it. Besides he has a woman already…named Elizabeth.” Satan Jr. said as he looked at the black angel.
“So what does that mean to me? If I want him I will have him…you know how I do Satan Jr.” Deception smiled as her eyes connected with the black angel.
The black angel never looked back at deception as he was to focus on Satan Jr.
Satan Jr. just smiled and said, “We never got to finish our fight back on earth……”
“That’s true. So are you saying you want me to finish what I was going to do to you?” The Black angel asked as he smirked a cocky smile.
“Why my, my……see that is why I have no respect for humans. Once they get a taste of power they act like they rule the world. Tell me human do think because you have a halo and wings you are in the same class as me?” Satan Jr. asked.
“I am above your class rank for I, Donnie Donville, became an angel.” The black angel bragged.
Him and Satan Jr. eyes locked as the air around them became a barricade for only those two. That’s when Donville wings appeared and he said “God speed.” He took off at full speed and unsheathed his dagger as he lunged at Satan Jr. but to his surprise he was stop. His dagger caught in between two fingers. Donville looked up to a pair of sky blue eyes looking back down at him.
“Master what do I do with him?” Jugo asked.
Satan Jr. smiled and said, “Create some room for me……he is standing to close to me.”
Jugo grunted as he slightly twisted his fingers. The dagger broke in half.
“What he is that strong?” Donville thought to himself as he watched the broken metal hit the floor. As he looked back up he saw Jugo throwing a punch. Luckily for him his reaction time was good. “God speed.” Donville yelled as he dodged the punch Jugo threw, but even though he did that he was still sent reeling backwards from just the wind alone from Jugo’s punch. Eyes open wide now, Donville began to investigate who Jugo was.
“Is this Viss, the gold flame? He defiantly has the strength of an army.”
Jugo just stood there and looked when behind Satan Jr. and his company the doors of Castel Heaven were swung wide open. Satan Jr. and his company all turned to see who just walked in. There were 5 beings that walked.
“Well now if it isn’t the badasses of Nirvana Hercules, Zeus, Poseidon, and Jackson!” Satan Jr. laughed as he looked at all four of them but then his eyes rested on the fifth one with the dark brown hair, big brown eyes, with bronze color skin.
“Well you defiantly look like my father no doubt about that.” Satan Jr. finished.
The bronze color man then spoke. “Yes, and from the looks of it you must be Satan Jr. You look just like me only with pale skin and short, spikey, black hair.”
“Hey, what can I say the tan for me never worked out.” Satan Jr. smiled as he snapped his fingers. A black fireball appeared in his hand.
That’s when Hercules drew his blade and shouted out loudly, “God speed.”
His Angel wings flapped once as he took off at tremendous speed. He lunged forward as his blade pierce threw flesh. Blood splatter everywhere including Satan Jr.’s face. A creepy smile came about across Satan Jr. face as he spoke.
“My, my Hercules aren’t you in a rush to get the ball rolling. I haven’t even Introduce you to my servant who which you just stabbed in the hand.
Hercules dark brown eyes connected with Jugo’s Sky blue eyes. Hercules blade rand threw Jugo’s Hand to the other side but Jugo did not once scream, or holler out in pain. He never winced in pain, or lost focus on Hercules.
Hercules smiled, “And who is this being standing in front of me? I know he is not a demon because he took a strike from my Dremon head on. His blood however does not smell like a normal human.”
“Well now Herc, that is where the problem lies, I have no idea what this young man is nor do I know of his origin, but all I know is that I found him at the age of 11 or 12 with the letters SJR burned on his back.” Satan Jr. explained.
“SJR?” Hercules repeated.
“Yes SJR. Now that could stand for anything or anybody, but wouldn’t you find it very suspicious that I was cast out of Gahanna 2 years prior to meeting this boy, and that he would be in the path that I selected with hooded cloak my size in the dark forest where I was most hated at?” Satan Jr. Inquired.
Hercules eyes shifted back and forth from Satan Jr. to Jugo a couple of times.
“Master if I may this is who I want to fight.” Jugo proclaimed.
Satan Jr. just smiled. “Hmmm, so you want to fight Hercules huh? I usually would say no to this juncture but what the hell, have at it anyway.”
That’s when Jugo turned his hand with Hercules’s blade in it hand. Hercules went flying across the room. He was able to land on his feet however. Jugo quickly took Dremon out of his hand and drew back as far as he could. He then launched Dremon at Hercules. Hercules bend over backwards so the sword blade would fly over his head. That’s when he quickly grabbed the handle and looked up. He saw a charging Jugo coming right at him. He waited for a moment when he thought the timing was right. He swung violently but Jugo dodged the attack with ease as he weaved out the way of the blade and began to come with a left jab counter attack. That’s when Hercules took his blade and tried to block the counter attack but it didn’t matter. Jugo punched Dremon and sent Hercules flying across the room. He hit the wall……”SMACK!”
Hercules lost all wind for a couple of seconds and just when it look like he was about to fall he caught himself by his blade to help him stand up. He looked daze as Jugo looked like a giant blur to him.
“Well now it looks like Jugo is having fun.” Satan Jr. said. He then turned his attention to the Zeus, Poseidon, Jackson and Jesus. “And then there were three.” He smirked.
“But there is four over there my love and not to mention that handsome black angel over there and there are about a thousand angel knights with arrows pointing at us.” Deception said as she put her hand over her mouth.
“Well my love you do not have to worry about my uncle Jesus. He’s a pacifist. As far as the angel knights go well you know how that story goes.” Satan Jr. Said as he began to grin.
“And your handsome friend behind you……I heard not you mention him so I take it he is a threat?” Deception asked.
“Just a minor one my love.” Satan Jr. answered back.
“So, do you want to split them down the middle you get two and I get two?” Deception asked.
“No my love I was thinking more along the lines three to one. Unless of course you think three big strong angels will be too much for you.” Satan Jr. challenged.
A big beautiful smile crept across Deception face as she grabbed Satan Jr. and kissed him. “Oh thank you my love.” She Caroled.
“You are welcome my love and Omanga is going to assist you as well.” Satan Jr. smiled as he rubbed Deception’s face.
She then rolled her eyes, “He just assisting right. Like helping me out when I need it, but at the end I am the only one to beat up those angels right?”
“Well of course my love only you will get to bare ill-will on those angels. Is that understood Omanga?” Satan Jr. Inquired.
“Yeah, yeah, the evil little bitch wants to be selfish.” Omanga hissed as he slivered over there to where Satan Jr. and Deception was at.
Deception then clapped with joy. Satan Jr. turned his attention to Donville.
“I will deal with you personally……” Satan Jr. said.
“Is that so? Are you sure you don’t want your giant friend to intervene like last time? Cause in my opinion I feel he might be the better fighter.” Donville said.
“Well see you probably but I think I will save him the trouble and just end you myself…..in fact I think you have something I want.” Satan Jr. smiled.
“Oh you must mean this.” Donville said as he pulled Atsuryoku kata.
Satan Jr. just smiled, “yeah that’s the thing I am looking for.”
Meanwhile back on earth…….
Bain was rapidly swing his blade threw the air as Gabriel quickly covered his ears. That’s when Bain stop swinging his blade and just looked at Gabriel. He then mouthed the words “God speed.” And with the one flap of his wings took off.
“Damn it, I have to take my hands down to catch his blade with my bare hands.” Gabriel said as he watched the charging Bain coming at him.
He took his hands down but instantly began to feel weak as heard a faint singing. His body began to go numb but right before he went completely he took both hand and jabbed them into his arms as blood oozed out of each. With a mighty yell he ripped both his hand out of his arms and caught the Bain’s blade in the nick of time. However after he caught the blade his symptom got worse as spit fell out his mouth but it just levitated there as the singing he heard earlier became really loud. As the Singing continued Gabriel became more and more in pain. His body began to stiffen and he felt like a python was wrapped round his body squeezing.
“Damn it sometime I really do hate the fact that this kid picked his sister over us.” Gabriel thought as he struggled to hold Bain’s Blade back from stabbing him.
With the little strength he had left, Gabriel spoke. “Angelic arte: Reverse vibrations.” The attack then was in reverse as Bain had thrown back and eyes got wide with pain. His spit then levitated above him. Gabriel then let go of the blade and Bain body began to plummet to the building underneath him.
Bain however was able to flap his wings once or twice to break his fall. Breathing heavy he looked up and seen Gabriel casting another arte.
“Angelic Arte: Lovely lullaby elimination.” A golden ball appeared in his hand as he threw it down towards Bain.
There was a huge light and you heard what sounded like children singing a lovely tune. People began to drop and fall asleep. Once the light was gone the building that was once there was reduce to nothing but gravel. “Well that should do it.” Gabriel said. He then floated over to where Michel had landed. He looked about trying to find Michel’s body, when Michel’s hand popped out the dirt. Gabriel then went and grabbed Michel’s hand and helped him from und the dirt and building debris.
“Man, Bain beat you up pretty badly huh?” Gabriel joked.
“Shut up Gabriel, you look like you been through hell and back your damn self. “ Michel snapped back.
“Yeah well while you were taking a dirt nap I was busy taking care of Bain.” Gabriel said back.
“Took care of Bain….how?” Michel asked as he stopped in mid tracks.
“Well I used Lovely lullaby elimination and the rest was history.” Gabriel shrugged.
Michel then grabbed Gabriel by the collar of his shirt. “You used that move with human civilians around…..you fucking idiot you might have killed innocent people. You are so reckless sometimes little brother I do not know what to do with you.”
“Relax M, geez I made sure no one was within 10 yards of the attack for I used it, so at worse there are people who are just knocked out.” Gabriel said as he put his hands up.
Michel breathed very hard before letting Gabriel go. They walked up and out of the building to see a giant angel hovering over them. She had long white hair, and pale white skin. She had own a long white dress and a thrown crown on. She was crying as she had hand her hands together praying.
“What the hell is this?” Michel asked as he looked at the crying angel.
That’s when Bain appeared. His neck was a nasty black color as he had a really dark purple aura around his body. He mouthed out some words.
“Wait did he say this is my hell raiser magic, praying grieving angel?” Gabriel asked.
“That’s impossible though, even though he is a rouge Angel he is still an angel, which means he cannot use hell raiser magic without it killing him.” Michel answered back. That’s when Bain began to cough up blood.
“It is killing the poor lad.” Gabriel said as he watched Bain continuously cough up blood.
“But why? Does killing us have that mean that much to him?” Michel asked.
That’s when Bain stretched his blade out to the east and mouth the words “Angelic spell: schreien Banshee.”
The short sword then turned blue and shatter into little blue particles. Then a huge whirling wind came into his hand. It sucked in all the blue particles the then instantly stopped. Bain short sword had transformed into a blade that was 2 yards long.
“What the hell?” Michel asked as him and Gabriel looked at the gigantic blade.
Bain held the blade High in the sky and open his mouth as though he was screaming. Doing so the blade let out a terrifying wailing scream. Windows everywhere within a 100 yards shatter from this sound. As human’s heads began to explode on top of the shoulders, and even some of the humans bodies began to explode. Gabriel and Michel covered their ears but it was nothing but a failed attempted as their ears still bled out.
Right then and there Bain mouthed out, “God speed and flapped is wings once as he took off at full speed towards Gabriel and Michel. Right when He got in front of them he then mouthed the words “Angelic Magic: Silent kill.” He said as he swung his blade. A bright phantom blue light lit up the city and its sky.
Meanwhile back in Nirvana…..
Percy, Poseidon, and Zeus all locked eyes with Deception who was just smiling at them. They were the only ones left in the room now because Hercules and Donville both where no longer in the castle fight but are now outside.
“We need to hurry this up. I don’t like Hercules’s odds against that monstrosity beast.” Zeus said.
“What, you think Hercules can’t handle himself?” Poseidon asked.
“It’s not that it’s just I would feel better if we made sure he is okay.” Zeus answered back.
“Well my friend I can agree with you on that.” Poseidon said as he put his hand on Zeus shoulders.
“Hey does that mean we have to save Donville to?” Percy asked curiously.
Zeus then sighed.
“Unfortunately yes we do have to go save that over confident punk.” Poseidon grunted.
“Wish we could just pretend he wasn’t angel.” Percy sighed.
“Yeah so do I, but he is still one of ours therefore we will protect him at all cost……isn’t that right my prince.” Zeus smiled. Jesus nodded his head.
“Aw look at them over there coming together to come up with a plan to defeat me and save their comrades. I find that so hot and sexy.” Deception announced flirtatiously as she twirled he long blonde hair.
“Yeah it’s real sexy to look over there and see four dangerous beings over there planning how they want to kill us.” Omanga said Sarcastically as he shook his head.
Deception smiling said, “I wonder which cards I should use to beat them all.”
Omanga looked down at Deception who was shuffling her cards. “How about Gangar or Drancan? They are by far your two strongest souls you own.”
“True but I don’t want to use them…….if I do then the fight will not last long and I want get to play that long.” Deception said.
Omanga just shook his head with disappointment.
Zeus, Poseidon, and Percy all turned around to a happy Deception.
“Well now, I think our god might have had you wrong.” Zeus said.
“Oh, how you figure?” Deception asked with a smile.
“Well if you really that evil bitch of which he speak of you would have attacked us when we won’t paying attention.” Zeus answered back.
“But you didn’t, which mean you have some lady like traits.” Poseidon said right behind Zeus.
“Well, I am very flatter by yawl complements…..but be careful with me. For I learned even the angriest of female dogs can be train to deceive.” Deception smiled.
Percy Jackson was behind Deception and went to go punch her but she easily caught his fist and said, “I know you didn’t really think I wasn’t ready for an obvious sneak attack.”
“Actually that was what we were hoping for.” Percy smiled as Omanga quickly came over and smacked Percy with his head as he yelled, “Deception put your head down!”
“It’s too late Omanga!” Poseidon announced loudly as he slapped his hands together. His body turned dark blue. Winds started to blow threw the building. “I am Poseidon, God of all liquid in the realm known as Olympia, and I am calling on all the liquid in this realm to come and aide me in this fight!” Poseidon continued. That’s when water rushed into Castel Heaven and began to flood the place. The water ran over Omanga and Deception.
That’s when Zeus grabbed the little bow necklace around his neck and snatch it off as he put both his hands together and pronounced on the top of his voice, “I am Zeus, God of all gods in the realm known as Olympia, and in my hand I hold the greatest power known to any being in any realm! This power is known as Lighting and I summon it now!” Zeus began to take his hands apart slowly as the little bow that was on the necklace began to grow. Once big enough Zeus grabbed it and that’s when a quiver appeared on his back. He reached inside the quiver and pulled out a lightning bolt. He then said “Destructive Lightning strike.” As he let go of the bolt that ripped through the water as it struck where Omanga and Deception was at. Once it had hit the target thunder roared loudly through Castle Heaven as the water shot up. As the water came back down it was as though it was raining in Castle Heaven.
The Angel guards who had the arrows pointed down waited a few minutes before cheering loudly. “That is why they are known as the best.” “Yeah no one can beat Gods best group of angels.” The Angel guards sang. Applause and cheering bounced of the walls of Castle Heaven as Zeus and Poseidon both put their hands up in Victory.
“Look out!” Jesus yelled but it was too late as Octopus arms shot out the water and grabbed both Zeus and Poseidon around there neck. Another arm went to go and grabbed Jesus.
That’s when Percy came through gliding on water and grabbed Jesus from the clutches of that arm but more arms appeared. Percy however did not panic as a cocky smirk came over his face. He took off across the water as the arms began to come at him and Jesus. Percy dodged, bobbed, and weaved almost every arm as he jumped into the air. But just when Percy thought he made a home run another arm came out the water as it reached out to grab him and Jesus.
Not panicking though He stuck his arm out with his palm open and said, “I am Percy, son of Poseidon who is the God of liquid in the realm known as Olympia, which makes me the price of all liquid. So I call upon all liquid now to aide me as I call for one of my beast to come forward now.” The water where the arm was began to move rapidly as Percy body took on a dark blue glow.
“I summoned Aquagator to come forth and help me now!” He yelled. That’s when the water started to move as it shot up in the air. It took on the form of a giant alligator with red eyes. The water shaped alligator open its jaws wide as it clamped down on the last arm and snatched it down. Percy though now noticing that he is about to crash into the wall, embraced Jesus and prepared himself to crash into the wall. He then hit the wall hard as he yelped in pain. At the same time the creature who that arm that the Aquagator bit and snatched under water also roared in pain. It let Zeus and Poseidon go.
“Percy, are you okay?” Jesus asked.
“Yea I think I just fracture my shoulder.” Percy said as he held his arm.
“Well I can use my Miracle arte and heal your shoulder.” Jesus said as he put his hands up to perform the Arte.
Percy however slapped his hands down and said, “Jesus you know better than to use that arte. God said every time you use that arte it depletes your life force. Why you think Hercules has been training you so hard so you can learn Angelic artes.
Jesus then looked down with shame and disappointment. Percy looked at Jesus and blew.
He took his hand and stuck it into the water and when he pulled it out he had a bubble of water around his hand as he put his hurt shoulder. He winced in pain as he rubbed it across his shoulder.
Poseidon and Zeus came over to where both Jesus and Percy were.
“Are you two okay?” Zeus asked.
“What, of course they are. My boy Percy is a born champion, and mange to save the day. I am proud of you my boy.” Poseidon said as he smiled.
Percy then smiled back.
“Aw how touching father and son, parent and child……if only I had that connection with my parents maybe I wouldn’t be this physco bitch I am today.” Deception Remarked.
That’s when a giant pink head popped out the water with big eyes and tentacles waving. On top of its head sat a dry and unharmed Deception. And a grey Omanga.
Omanga skin started to change back purple and black as he looked at Deception with anger. “Look, Deception please do better than what the hell you are doing before we die.”
Deception just ignoring Omanga kept her eyes on the 4 beings in front of her. A smile crept up on her face as she gazed upon her prey.
“So she survived our combo attack huh?” Poseidon asked.
“It looks that way brother, but I guess there is a first time for everything.” Zeus said back.
“Hey, you guys! You are pretty strong so from here on out I won’t be holding back. Deception said as her she continuously smiled.
Omanga looked at her for second and began to think to himself. “Her persona has change. You couldn’t since it at first but now with every second this battle goes on her intent to kill is becoming more and more visible. The demonic soul that god had spoken of is finally showing threw her act. When you first lay eyes on her you would think that she is weak girl who just has tricks up her sleeves but when she gets serious you can since the blood thirst that lay on her heart. So is this what my master was seeing in her. If so it would make since why he was so adamant about her joining the team.” Omanga looked on down to the four beings that stood there.
“Omanga now remember what your master told you and be a good little pet like you have been doing.” Deception smiled.
“Yes, of course but don’t forget what my master told you neither. No killing, now you make sure you do that and be the good little physco bitch he has come to love.” Omanga mocked back.
“Kill them, oh I won’t do that however I will have them lying so close to their tombstone they won’t know whether or not they are alive.” Deception smiled.
She then plucked a card off the top of her deck. She looked at the card and sighed. “You are by far one of my weakest souls however with the terrain we are fighting on I can understand why the universe would want me to use you.” She then threw the card towards the water and said, “I summon you Krabbler to do my bidding.” The card began to glow as it hit the water. “Demonic arte: soul release.”
Nothing happen, as the water sat still.
“What did she just do?” Zeus asked as he, Poseidon, Percy, and Jesus all was on high alert.
Deception licked her top lip and said, “He never seen it coming.”
A huge Pincer came out the water fast. Jesus, Poseidon, and Zeus all was able to dodge the massive pincer however Percy’s leg was caught by it. A couple seconds after catching Percy’s leg……”Snap!”
“AHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Percy yelled as blood flew everywhere. His leg landed in the water and began to sink as his body hit the water. He was hyperventilating while trying to stay afloat. He was gripping his thigh as blood continuously ran out of it.
A giant three eye crab popped out the water. It drew its large pincer back. It then swung with great velocity, but Poseidon acted quickly as he summoned one of his mythical creatures to his son aide.
“I am, Poseidon, king and ruler of all liquid in the realm of Olympia and I summon Cetus, ploíarchos tou neroú tis ámynas neroú.” Posiedon commanded.
The Pincer was caught just inches of Percy’s heart.
Deception then jumped down from the giant pink head. She landed gracefully on top of the water and looked at the two Olympian Gods in front of her.
Zeus quickly began to pull lighting arrows from his quiver and shot them at Deception. She began to dodge each arrow as she took off towards the two Gods.
She hit Zeus in his stomach, spit floated out of his mouth as he stumbled back. She then rolled over his back and charged at Posiedon.
Poseidon swung with all his might but slid under him. She got up and countered another punch by Poseidon. She hit him in his side and jumped up and dropped kicked him in the chest as he went flying back. He rolled over Zeus back as he fell into the water. She then got up quickly and rushed Zeus. He shot an arrow at her but she maneuver passed his arrow and ran up his body as she jumped off his shoulder high into the air. Zeus saw her in the air as she appeared to get ready to do a heel drop kick. He prepared himself to block the attack. He put his bow up to where he thought she might strike, however he never even anticipate the power of her blow. She came straight down with tremendous force. Her heel broke the bow in half and her heel struck Zeus in the neck. His pupils constricted as he lost conscientiousness as he fell into the water.
“Well is that it of the mighty group god praises so highly? This is sad, I was expecting so much more.” Deception said as she shook her head.
Jesus then looked around a thought to himself he had to help somehow. So he dove under the water.
“You are a fool if you think we lost.” Percy spewed from his mouth.
Deception then turned and looked at the hurt Percy. She licked her lips as she smiled. “Well now, such courageous heart, just turns me on…I just got to have you.” She began to walk over to Percy who was being protected by Cetus. She stopped and showed Percy a blank card. “No, literally I have to have you.” The card began to glow as Deception body had a black aura around it. Percy could feel his soul being pulled from his body. “Don’t fight it bae, you know you want to be with me just let it happen, and I promise I can make you feel more alive than ever.”
Those words sunk into Percy’s heart as he began to give in. She smiled as she closed her eyes. That’s when water shot up. “Ooo, daddy is here to save the day? “ She mocked.
A huge trident came out of the uprising water first. Deception dodged the attack and tried to run to Percy, but Poseidon large hand caught her by hair.
She yelled in pain as Poseidon slung her across the water. She smacked into the wall hard.
The water stop rising as a wet dark blue Poseidon stood there with his eye gold and his hair now teal. “I am threw playing with you, from here on out you will feel the full wrath of an Olympian God.
Meanwhile…………………..
Under the water Jesus is swimming. He found the other half of Percy’s leg. He grabbed it and looked around. He finally spotted the un-conscientious Zeus. He began to swim towards him when he felt something wrap around one of his legs. It was Omanga, and he and Jesus began to struggle under the water. They tussle for a minute before Jesus took his hand and touch Omanga face. Omanga face started to burn as he let Jesus go. Jesus quickly acting while Omanga was hurt swam over a grabbed Zeus and then swam for the surface. He popped his head up and out of the water gasping for air. He noticed that he was inside of Cetus barrier. He looked over and seen the hurt Percy still hovering in the water with the large Pincer still aimed at him. Jesus swam over.
“Percy this might hurt but I need you to hold still Jesus said as he grabbed Percy thigh. Percy yelled in pain as Jesus Put the other half of his leg near his thigh. He then said “Miracle arte: Heeling hands. A golden glow appeared for a second and then disappeared. Percy leg was reattached and he could stand on water again.
“Thank you Je…..” Percy started but stopped to grab Jesus hand. That was out of the water. He pulled Jesus back above water.
“See that is why you I scold you about using Miracle artes.” Percy scolded.
Jesus took a deep breath and said. “But Percy I did it so you can help your father.” Jesus and Percy looked off and seen Poseidon and Deception go at it.
“You think my father needs help?” Percy asked.
“Well no, they look very evenly matched but if you get in there we will have the advantage.” Jesus answered back.
Percy smiled and shook his head. “I keep forgetting you are a newbie at this. My father does not need any help and those two are not evenly matched. If anything that girl Deception needs help and will be over powered in a few.”
Over where Deception and Poseidon fought……
(Deception is breathing heavy) “I know I am hitting him with everything I got and yet not even a scratch on his body. But then again I never thought this would be an easy fight. He is part of the big four any way. At this point of time I need to recall back Krabbler and Kracdiana to summon a black soul. I love my red souls but they lack the firepower needed to take on Poseidon at this point of time. The giant Pink head with huge eyes and tentacles, and the giant 3 eye crab both glowed white and returned to card form. They both floated to towards Deception. They landed on top of the deck and she started to shuffle the cards.
“Do you think I am stupid Deception????? I pretty much understand your power. You are allowed to summon creatures from those cards, however……if you can’t get your incantation off in time then your cards are useless.” Poseidon claimed as he put his hand up.
“So I will end you now as I summon my strongest creature from the realm of Olympia. I summon Ayokio, o kátochos táfo tou neroú.” Poseidon spoke as the water began to swirl in a crazy whirl pool. Then from the whirl pool a woman appeared. She had dark blue with yellow eyes and her long hair was teal.
“Ayokio, kill Deception now!” Poseidon commanded. Ayokio put her two hands together and then pulled her left hand back as a water shape harpoon form in her hand.
Deception looked at the water harpoon. Ayokio smiled as she threw the harpoon. Deception managed to dodge the attack with a duck. She looked up and seen that the water shape harpoon left a huge hole in the wall. She looked back at a cocky Ayokio.
She put her hand on the deck and since a black soul card. Grando, the half-spider half-human. A powerful soul and if this was a fight where only strength applied I would so use him, but this is a fight on the water, this creatures and her master’s forte which means Grando strength will not be of great use to me.” Deception thought to herself. She then went back to shuffling the cards.
“Ayokio I do not want her to summon another creature from her deck kill her now!” Poseidon commanded strongly. Ayokio nodded and created another water shape harpoon. Deception took off running as Ayokio threw the harpoon. Dodging that one Deception notice that Ayokio was making the Harpoons faster and had to be on constant alert.
She still was shuffling her card s as she dodge weaved every one of Ayokio's harpoons. Unfortunately though one of her harpoons hit the water just right and sent Deception flying back. She hit the wall hard and almost fell in the water when she heard a voice call her.
“Isabelle.” The little boy voice called again. She looked out in the vase water to see a little boy standing there. He looked no older than five. He had short blonde hair and ocean blue eyes. “Isabelle no matter what I will always believe in you.” The little boy said as he closed his eyes and smile. He put a thumb up to. That’s when Deception stopped herself from falling. She gripped her deck tight and open one of her eyes. She looked at Ayokio as she put her hand on the deck. “
Gildan the Iron angel. His defense is beyond great and his attack power is nothing to sniff at neither…… but he is no good to me neither, because Iron rust in water.” Deception thought as she began to shuffle the deck again.
“Ayokio finish her now!” Poseidon demanded powerfully.
Ayokio nodded as she took off at full speed. She went to punch Deception in the face, but deception duck and then came back and head butted Ayokio in the head. Ayokio stumbled back as deception took off and try to run pass Ayokio as she kept shuffling.
Ayokio furious now grabbed Deception by her long blonde and slung her back into the wall. She then kneed Deception in the stomach repeatedly, and then slung her in the air.
As Deception floated in the air she saw a flash back.
“What the hell is this?” A man voice asked.
“It’s a kraken. Her name is Kracdiana, and she loves the water.” The young Deception said with a smile.
The man then pushed her down and tore up her picture. “That was the most hideous picture I ever seen.” He then looked up in the air and said, “God all I ask for was a loving wife, and talented kids. But instead you gave me a bitch who took everything from me except this garbage we call our kids. I hate them almost as much as I hate you god.” The man confessed as he slammed the bed room shut.
The young Deception began to cry when she felt a hand tap her shoulder. It was a young Bain, only five standing over his older sister. She looked at him. He had a black eye and whip marks all over his body, yet he still found a reason to smile. He pulled out a picture that young Deception had drawn from his back pocket.
“I like this one.” He said.
The young Deception looked at the picture. It was an Angel with large white wings. He held a blade and the name of the blade was Banshee amhránaíocht. He had blonde hair and ocean blue eyes with a blonde goatee. He wore silver armor and had heaven’s everlasting light shining on him.
The young Deception smiled and said “Our guardian angel. Train by the two most powerful angels ever. Gabriel and Michel, who taught him how to defend for what he love. He controls the sound like Gabriel but is as strong and fast as Michel. I like him too.”
“So don’t give up sis.” The young Bain said as he closed his as and smiled with a thumb up. “Because I believe in you and our guardian angel.”
Right then Ayokio was right above Deception and gave her a devastating kick to the stomach as Deception went plummeting down into the water. That’s when Poseidon took the triton and stuck it in the water.
“Olympian God magic: Buried at sea.” The water shook for only a moment and then it stilled in an instance.
The Angel guards this time did not cheer for a moment. After a few minutes has pass Poseidon skin color began to change back to normal as he looked up and threw his hand up in victory. That’s when the angels began to cheer once again.
As Posiedon and Ayokio started to walk away, Ayokio stopped and seen a bright white light shining in the water.
“We did it……we finally ridded this world of that evil bitch once and for all.” Posiedon preached as he high five with Percy.
“I just hope her soul may finally rest in peace.” Jesus said as he drew an air cross on his body. Posiedon nodded with agreement.
Percy looked over his father’s shoulder and asked “hey dad, what is Ayokio doing, and what that bright light in the water is?”
Posiedon looked back and he and Ayokio eyes connected for a second. That’s when chains came out and wrapped around her neck, arms, legs and her body as it yank her under water.
“Ayokio!” Posiedon screamed as he took off and ran to her but when he got there it was too late she was yanked under the water. He looked down into the water and seen a pair of light blue eyes staring right back at him. They got bigger and bigger as they came to the surface fast.
Posiedon quickly moved across the water as water behind him shot up in rage. Once the water disappear a giant black dragon like creature appeared. It had a crooked beak with sharp, shinning white teeth. The creature’s eyes were blue and it had a white belly with a blue streak on it. The Dragon creature thing gave a roar that shook castle heaven.
The Angel guards began to fly out of the castle in a panic.
Omanga who was on top of the Dragon creature head with Deception just looked at her. Her eyes were a nasty black color and tears of blood ran down her face. Her body gave off a dark purple aura surrounded her body.
“What is she? I mean first off she should be dead, it’s impossible to will both demonic and hell raiser magic. Then on top of that she used up a lot of her magic summoning those first two creatures, and sensing the power of this creature I know that she cannot be using magic…..no she is defiantly using her own life force to channel this creature here and keeping it at bay on top of that. Then finally the question is how did she obtain a creature of this magnitude? Its power level is through the roof. If I gaging this correctly this creature has the power level of god, King Titan, and Satan; or even more powerful than that. I haven’t caught a chill like this since Anartie came to this realm. “Omanga thought.
“Never again”, she mumbled.
Omanga slithered back some from her as he could sense her blood thirst become more and more vivid.
She then had a flashback of her father beating on her and her little brother.
“He gave me this power to protect me and Bain, and I be damn if I let anyone kill and take away the only power I ever had!” She screamed. The dragon roared along with her scream as the castle shook left and right.
Deception then got the thinking of when she first met Satan Jr.
The man looked the Young Bain with angry eyes. The belt was clutched in his hand and he grinded his teeth together. “Look at me!” He yelled. Young Bain never looked up though. Only at the ground as tears fell from his face. The man cocked his arm back and young Bain closed his eyes and waited for the impact.
“SMACK!” The belt sang as it went cross young Bain’s face. Young Bain hit the ground as he balled up in a ball.
“All you had to do was steal some bread so we could eat tonight. You had the bread but put it back because you were scared you were going to get in trouble. I don’t have no pussy in my blood after this beating neither will you.” The man said as he cocked back and hit Young Bain over and over again.
Young Deception looked as she watched her young brother get beat. She bit her bottom lip and mumble, “Please stop. He is just a little boy he will die.”
The man did not stop however as he continued to swing and hit the boy.
With every strike young Deception could see pain shoot over her little brother’s face. He got struck again, and he opened his mouth wide as though he wanted to scream but no sound came out. The only thing that came out of his mouth was blood. She covered her mouth as tears ran down her face.
The man cocked back again to strike the young Bain. Young Deception hopped up though and jumped on top of her little brother to shield him.
The man stopped in mid stride and looked at the young Deception who was doing her best to shield her brother away from him. The man just smiled and said, “Okay if you think you can take his beating for him fine by me.”
The man went and began to strike young Deception with the belt. She did not scream nor hollered out. She was clinching the rug though as her tears fell from her face and landed on the face of young Bain. Bain looked at his sister who never flinched nor holler from the strikes she was receiving. With every strike though she mouthed the words I love you to young Bain.
“So you still don’t want to move little stubborn bitch?” The man asked as he grabbed young Deception by her hair.
Her tears ran down her face as she looked the man in his face. She put her hands together and prayed, “god if you can hear me please, save me and my brother.”
The man cock back and yelled “the only god here is me!”
He then went to swing the belt when his hand was caught by a brown hand. He looked to his left and seen a young brown colored boy with sky blue eyes looking at him. The boy was skinny and head was shaved bald except for a pony tail that was tied up in the back. The boy grip was very strong as the man tried to break free.
“And who the hell is you???? One of my little whore of a daughter’s friends?” The man asked. The boy did not answer just looked at the man.
The man frustrated now balled up his fist and cocked back.
(Sounds of somebody sucking in air) “Ooo, I would highly advise against swinging on my buddy Jugo here, unless you don’t care for your life anymore.” A voice announced from behind the man.
The man then turned around and asked, “And who in the hell are you?”
“Hell, well now I would think you would know who I am since you know where I am from.” The other man said as the skin on his jaws ripped so his mouth can open wider.
The man that was beating young children looked at the other man. His hair was black with black eyes. The man swallowed hard as he continuously looked at the other man.
“What’s a matter man, you look like you seen a ghost.” A hiss came from the other side of the room.
The man and the young children looked and seen a giant snake on their sofa. It slither off a made a circle around the kids.
“Look don’t hurt them.” The man pleaded.
“Really, you dare say that to me after you have been torturing these kids since they came to you…… I thought you would want to get rid of them.” The man with black eyes answered back with an evil smile.
He then snapped his fingers and the giant snake lift his head and open his mouth wide. Young Bain hid his face in his sister chest as she cling him close to her.
The man with black eyes then walked over and said, “Omanga that’s enough. Let the girl out, I want to speak to her.”
After a few moments had past and young deception did not move the snake hissed violently. “My master said move child.”
“No, I would not dare move as long as you have my brother surrounded. He is terrified of you.” Young Deception voiced.
“As should you be if you piss me off.” The snake hissed back.
“Omanga move.” The man with black eyes demanded.
“But master-““I said move.” The man with black is grunted.
“Of course as you wish my lord.” Omanga hissed as he moved his body from around the children.
“Now will you come to me child?” The man with black eyes inquired as he stuck his hand out to young Deception. She at first hesitated to grab his hand but eventually grabbed it. As she began to get up she still felt young Bain clinging to her.
“Don’t worry Bain I won’t let anyone hurt you okay?” She said.
Young Bain nodded and then she kissed him on top of his forehead as he let her shirt go.
The man with black eyes just smiled at the young Deception with happiness.
“Who are you?” Young Deception asked.
“It’s not who am I, it’s more like, what am I?” The man with black eyes and hair smiled.
“Okay what are you then?” Deception asked once more.
“Well I am a demon of course.” The man with black eyes and hair answered.
“A demon?” Young Deception terrifyingly asked as she began to back up.
The man with black hair and eyes just gazed at the frighten girl. “Child why do you back up from me? Do I smell?” The man with black eyes and hair asked as he sniffed under his armpits.
“You’re a demon, and demons are the true definition of evil.” Young deception answered back.
“You watch your lounge when addressing my master, Prince Jr.” Omanga hissed from the other side of the room.
“Omanga, please. Have you already forgotten what my father said? The humans are nothing but children who had have already been felt with these fairy tailed stories of how everything in heaven is good and everything in hell is bad. “
“Well its true isn’t it?” Young deception inquired.
The demon man again just looked at her with his dark eyes before he spoke. “Let ask you this, what is righteousness?”
Young Deception just looked at the demon man with a puzzling look.
“Well?”
She swallowed hard before answering. “Righteousness is having morals that are justifiable.”
“That is correct! Now child tell me what is evil.” The demon asked of her.
“It’s un-pure, wicked deeds of which is unmoral.”
“Correct again, but tell me what is moral and unmoral.”
Young Deception Just looked at the Demon.
“Come on now child you have been on a role so far I am sure you know the answer to this one as well.”
“Moral or good would be god or Jesus for they live in the purest of light, however evil or unmoral is what you and your father Satan is. Living in the dark and hurting people.” She answered.
“Is that so my child?” The demon man asked as he snapped his fingers. Jugo then twisted the man’s arm and then pushed him to the ground.
“Oh how I wish you would have seen things my way, but of course you are no different from any other human who clings to my grandfather’s words.” The demon said as he began to walk away.
“What are you going to do?” Young Deception asked as she watched the demon pick up the belt.
“Well you said I am evil, so why not show you what you believe.” The demon said as he bent down to the man who was on the ground. He got close to his ear and whispered, “Now beat her to death.”
The man eyes became black as he stood up.
He began to walk towards young Deception.
“Hey if I was you I would get the praying to God and Jesus, you know the ones that you said are good, pure and have morals that are justifiable.” The demon man mocked.
That’s when the man took off and ran towards young Deception with that belt. She dodged his first swing and ran to jump over the couch.
“Ooo, very athletic Isabelle, I give you an 8.5 for sticking that landing.” The demon man Joked. She then tried to take off and run but Omanga took his tail and tripped her.
“Oops sorry didn’t know you were trying to escape.” The snake hissed as he slither passed her.
The man was right over top of her now as he cocked back to swing. He swung once but young Deception rolled out of the way. She then kicked him in the crotch and got up to run but the man caught her by her long blonde hair and smacked her across the face with the belt.
She fell to the ground holding her face crying. As the man cocked his arm back to swing once more young Bain jumped up on the man’s back and began to bite him on the neck. The man yelled in pain as he threw Bain into the wall.
Young Deception looked at her brother. The man rubbed his neck and then looked back at young Deception as he grunted and once more began to make his move towards her.
“No get away!” She yelled as she tried to crawl away. The man grabbed her by her leg. “No please help me!” She screamed out to the demon man standing there watching.
“Ooo, I wish I could but that would be me being good and pure and well I am the opposite.” The demon man smiled. The man smack young Deception across every part of her body as she screamed and kick. But no use, no matter what she did she could not get the man to stop.
Young Bain battle to his feet and ran towards the man. He jumped on his back and put him in a choke hold. “Isabelle run!” Her little brother yelled.
Young Deception got and began to run when she tripped and fell in front of the demon man. She looked up a smiling demon pointing behind her. She looked back to her little brother Bain bring slung in her direction. He hit the floor hard.
“Bain.” she said breathlessly. The young boy got up breathing heavy.
“Hey I thought I told you to run….” He said as he smiled at his sister.
“Why are you doing this, you should run I have to protect you.” Young Deception answered back.
Young Bain just looked back and smiled. “Isabelle you have protected me my entire life, now it’s my turn to protect you.” Young Bain then took off at the man. The man cocked back and then smacked Bain with the belt. You could see the light leave his eyes as he smacked face first into the wall. He bounced off the wall and began to fall. That’s when the man took the belt and wrapped it around the kid’s neck. Young Bain began to gasp for air. As the man grip got tighter and tighter.
Young Deception turned to the Demon man and began to apologize for what she said.
“I accept your apology; the only way I will save your brother I need you to say it.” The Demon smiled evilly.
“Say what, I will say anything you want me to if it can save my baby brother.”
“Good, then you should have no problem pledging you soul to me and me only.”
Young Deception paused for a moment before answering. That’s when she couldn’t even hear her brother gasping no more. She turned around to see his motionless body sit there with his neck in the belt.
“Ooo, you might want to hurry he could be dead.” The Demon man said.
“Okay! I pledge my soul to you! Now please save him.” Young Deception cried.
“Oh no I am not going to save him, you are my dear.” The demon man then kissed young Deception and vast purple light shot around her body. She could feel the demon power surge threw her body as they kiss. Once they were done the demon said, “Well now go and try out your new powers.”
Deception got up and smiled as she began to walk towards the man. He took the belt from around young Bain's neck, which after a couple of moments began to breathe again.
The man cocked back and swung the belt, young deception dodge the belt and threw a quick left jab to the man lower right rib. The man stumbled back as he tried to catch his breathe. He went and swung again but she once more dodged it like child’s play as she sent him a rocking right to his face. He stumbled back again. Young Deception smiled and shrugged her shoulders while putting up her guard. The man then charged at her with the belt and swung it hard, but she back spring on her hands to dodge the swinging belt. She then countered by sending herself back up with both feet planted in the man’s chest. He went flying through the glass back door behind him.
The girl just sat there on the ground for a moment before the demon man walked over to her. “You knew how to fight this whole time??” He asked.
“Of course.” She answered back.
“So why didn’t you fight back at first?” The demon asked.
“Well I am only 14 year old girl, and that’s a whole 35 year old Navy seal officer…..I couldn’t possibly beat him without the power you just gave to me.” She shrugged her shoulder.
The demon just looked at her as she stroked her little brother head. Jugo then came over and tapped Him on his shoulder. The demon man turned around and Jugo handed him the gun.
“Oh yes, before we celebrate…” The demon man started as he handed young Deception the gun. She held it in her hand and caressed it. She then looked up at the demon that smiled and nodded. She then kissed Bain on his forehead and got up and walked outside. The man was getting up as she shot a bullet pass him. That’s when his eyes changed back to regular as he was looking down the barrel of the gun. He swallowed hard before speaking.
“Isabelle baby I am sorry for what I did, I had no control over my limbs or my mind. That man made me do it.”
Young Deception then shot to the left of the man who then broke down into tears.
“He only controlled you this one time, what about the other times you beat the hell out of me and Bain?” She asked as she smacked him in the face with the gun.
“I’m so sorry.” the man pleaded. She shot to the right of him.
The man jumped as the tears began to flow down his face faster and harder now.
“Please Issy baby listen to me I love you and B. I really do and I am sorry that I blame ya’ll for what ya’ll mother did to me. But I did not deserve this life. I was a respect officer, and a loving father and husband. And then she just ups and leaves me for some punk who hits the lottery for 20 million dollars.” The man cried.
“No you right you didn’t deserve this life. With kids who still loved you. Who still believe in you.” She said as she shot in front of him. The man yelled in fear.
She just shook her head and said, “Hell you don’t even deserve the honor of me killing you.” She then dropped the gun in front of him and began to walk away. “I am leaving and taking Bain with me.
The gun clicked. “You aren’t going anywhere Isabelle.” The man said as he pointed the gun at his daughter.
Young Deception looked back and said, “Put down the gun you aren’t going to shoot me.” She began to walk again when a bullet shot pass her. She stopped for a second and looked at the demon man. He smiled and did a jester like he don’t know what she should do.
She then turned around and closed her eyes and smiled. “You are absolutely right daddy, I am sorry I tried to leave.”
“The man looked confused at first but let down his guard and walked over to young Deception. He wrapped his arms around her and claimed, “Issy, baby I love you and Bain more than life. I know I haven’t showed it lately but please understand I was in a dark place but I am back now.”
He then released her to look at her as she open her eyes. She opened her eyes and they were all black. The man found himself caught in a daze.
“Daddy, me and Bain isn’t leaving but we are going to go visit mommy for a while, so do me a favor. Once I pack up me and Bain’s bag I want you to come in the house and stand in the middle of the floor. Once you see us leave out and shut the door I want you to put the gun in your mouth and pull the trigger.”
The man eyes became all back like it was after the demon man whisper in his ear.
Young Deception then went in the house and pack up her and her brother cloths. As she walked out the room she looked at Jugo and smiled.
“Well you are a big good looking guy, you mind taking my bags for me. She reopen her eyes that where black again. She stared at Jugo for moments of time but Jugo eyes still remained sky blue and was unfazed by her gaze.
“Oh child you are wasting your time with Jugo. He cannot be influence by nothing.” The demon man told her.
She then closed her eyes and reopened them. They went back to that ocean blue color. Once she did that Jugo looked over to the Demon man who jester him to take the bag from young Deception.
He did so and began to walk out the house.
“I thought you said he cannot be influence.” Young Deception said as she put her hands on her hips.
“He’s not, he just listens to me.” The demon shrugged his shoulders. Omanga then slither on the scene holding young Bain with his tail.
“Can we go this brat heavy.”
“Hey don’t talk about my brother that way.”
The demon man just shook his head and said, “Come you two lets go.”
They began to leave out as young Deception yelled back, “daddy I am gone love you and will see you when I get back.” The door shut and a few seconds afterwards you heard a gunshot sing throughout the house.
When Deception re-open her eyes they laid on her opponents like they were her prey and she was the predator.
Poseidon swallowed hard and commanded Percy to watch over Jesus and his Uncle Zeus.
“But father you don’t have the power to fight this monster!” Percy shouted.
“Boy stand down now! I am your father and an Olympian God. You have disrespected me and if we weren’t in a dire situation I would cut your tongue off for your ignorant ass answer you gave me.”
Percy fell to his knees, “But father…”
“I love you Percy.” Poseidon smiled. Percy could see it on his father face. He was ready to die; he was okay with losing his life. Percy stretched out to his father but the water underneath Poseidon moved him towards the dragon.
“FATHERRRR!!!!!!!!” Percy yelled out.
Poseidon moving toward the dragon said “Deception this is the end for you!” He clinched his right hand into a fist and swung it. The water from his right side shot up and was on its way towards Deception however she did not panic instead she just drew a card from her deck.
“I think it’s time for you to show your new master what you can do. I summon you Ayokio. “Demon Arte: Soul release. The card transformed into Ayokio who summoned a wall of water to cancel out the raging water that came towards her and Deception.
As the water fell it was like it was raining inside the castle. Poseidon and Ayokio locked eyes as Poseidon mumbled her name. Ayokio had a water harpoon in her hand. By time Poseidon had seen the harpoon Ayokio had already thrown it and it pierce threw the left side of his chest. Blood left his mouth as the water under him disappeared. He began descending and right before he hit the water Percy came gliding across the water as he slid under his father to catch him.
“Hey I thought I told you to get Jesus out of here.” Poseidon smiled as blood ran out his mouth father.
“Dad don’t talk we will get you out of here I promise just hang on.” Percy cried as he cradled his father in his arms.
Poseidon rubbed his son face. “You look just like Sally, you know that.”
Percy crying shaking his head. Poseidon hand then dropped into the water as his eyes closed and his heart stopped beating. His body began to glow gold and in a matter of seconds his body disappeared from Percy’s hands.
Percy yelled out in pain and sorrow as his tears ran down his face. With Anger in his heart he looked at Deception who looked back at him. She smiled. “Now he is my equal someone who has felt pain beyond measures is the only warrior I will allow myself to be killed by.”
“Killed by???” Omanga asked.
“Yes, but today I do not die not yet, but soon. Very soon.” She cooed to herself.
Percy stood up and screaming angrily as the water began to circle his body. He then grabbed his necklace with the sword charm on it and snatched it from around his neck and slapped his hand together. “My name Percy and I am prince of the sea. I call upon of my greatest weapon I own. I call upon, Riptide to help me now.” The charm grew into a sword as the water that was rapidly moving around him stilled in an instance.
As Deception and Percy looked at each other and she could see it. Her own soul in Percy. “Yes, if I die I want it by no other hand but his, but not today, I won’t die today.
She then raised her hand and commanded, “Now Mecha black dragon use pure white flames of internal burning.”
There was a ray of white light that appeared in the dragon’s mouth. Percy griped his blade tight and took off towards the dragon.
“Is he nuts? I am not an expert at reading power levels but even I can since that attack is something we don’t want to be hit by….” Jesus thought to himself. “Unless, of course, his ability to read power levels are better than mines which means he knows he will die if that attack hits him. And he is okay with that, he is okay with dying.”
Jesus quickly put two of his fingers in the center of his forehead and said, “Angelic arte: Transportation to salvation.”
He then disappeared from sight. Percy still charging at the dragon. “Father I will join you soon.”
The dragon eyes locked with Percy’s, when a hand landed on his shoulder. Jesus was right there. “Do you think your father would want you to die Percy?!”
Percy eyes got wide. “If you die who protects the people from monsters like her. Percy your father died so you, me, and the rest of this Kingdom could live to fight another day, and I am not going to let you be selfish and tarnish is sacrifice by dying a meaningless death.” Jesus yelled as he put his hand in the middle of his forehead. “Angelic arte: Transportation to salvation.” He said in the nick of time. The dragon just unleashed its attack as the two disappeared from the castle. The attack shot all the way through the building as it crash through the throne room door and then through the wall down the hall way at the other end.
Satan Jr. looked up and said out loud, “Well they look like they are having fun.” Donnie Donville that was fighting Satan Jr was breathing hard. He had blood coming from his mouth. He had scratches all over his body with burn marks on his armor.
“Damn, this cannot be. We were more evenly matched when I was alive then now. But how can this be. I own a Buddha blade, I have trained with both Master Gabriel and Master Michel, I fight for justice and good and yet this monster, this barbaric creature is able to out class me.” Donnie thought as his eyes focused on Satan Jr. He then gripped Atsuryoku kata and got up to swing at Satan Jr. who back was turned. But Satan Jr. Dodge the attack without looking at his attacker. He then cut his eyes back at Satan Jr.
“Come on now…I know you can do better than that.” Satan Jr. antagonized.
Donnie grunted as he swung the spear again. “Metallic winds!” He yelled as he swung again.
Satan Jr. Dodge the attack again. He then summoned a black flame to his hand and gave Donnie a jab to the face. Donnie came of his feet but before he fell Satan Jr. gave him a mean kick to the back of his head.
“Wow that felt good.” Satan Jr. smiled. He saw that Donnie had let go of Atsuryoku kata. He walked over and picked up the spear.
He held it and gazed at the spear.
“You will never be able to wield the power of Atsuryoku kata.” Donnie said.
Satan Jr. just smiled and asked “Oh why not?”
“Because you are evil and unjust, with no moral. A creature of hell and that blade is made for good and only the purest of heart can-“Donnie Donville stop speaking as his head popped of his shoulder and his blood splattered on to the smiling face of Satan Jr.
His head plodded down the on the golden paved road and his body fell.
“I don’t know Donville; I think I will be able to manage with this.” Satan Jr. laughed.
He turned to a woman walking up with a yellow mask on his face. It had a black x on it. The woman took her hand and swiped across the mask that disappeared.
Satan Jr. then got down on one knee and said, “My queen you have arrived.”
She looked at Satan Jr. and rolled her eyes. She then gazed upon the spear in Satan Jr. hand. “Is that why we came here? For that weapon? Not to kill?”
“Yes, however if you killed the big guy I would completely understand. He is a force to be dealt with.”
“Tsk, more like a cowardly animal that could not accept death.” Queen Titian snarled.
Satan Jr. raised his eye brow.
“When I was about to deliver the final killer blow three angels showed up.” She explained.
Satan Jr. looked at her and noticed she was beat up pretty badly.
“This is just a hunch but, did one of the three angles happen to be a woman?” He asked.
Queen Titan looked at Satan Jr. with seriousness on her face.
“From the look on your face I would guess yes which means you came across Barry’s group which is known as team Herculis League equestris.”
Queen Titan looked angrily as she yelled with rage. That’s when two creatures appeared at her side. The also had on masks. One was bright orange with black dots on it. The other one was black with three bright orange slashes across it. They both swiped across their face and the mask disappeared. It was Kronos and Canos.
“My lady are you alright?” Canos asked. Queen Titan hissed then Canos into his brother.
“Well somebody seem pissed off.” A voice said from a distance. The two beings finally appeared and it was Deception and Omanga.
Satan Jr. Smiled as he went over to greet them. He and Deception kissed then he asked. “Did you really have to summon that damned creature?” Deception just smiled and looked down as she blushed.
Satan Jr. turned and looked at Omanga. “Oh my; my pet you look like you got the holy heaven beaten out of you. Are you okay?”
“Yes I am.” Omanga hissed. “This pain is nothing in compare to the new found fear I have of this girl.” Omanga thought as he looked at the blushing Deception.
“Well can we go? I am sick of being here.” Queen Titian said as she stuck her nose in the air.
“Yeah we can go.” Satan Jr. said as he bowed his head and extended his arm. Queen Titian walked in front and then the rest of the group followed when Deception spoke.
“Wait! We are forgetting someone.”
“What, no we not.” Omanga hissed.
“Yes we are.” Deception argued back.
“Look if you are talking about your brother we know he is on earth.” Queen Titian said.
“No I am not talking about Bain.” Deception said.
Satan Jr. looked at her and then counted out all people that where there with him. “Me, you, Omanga, Queen, the twins…that’s six love we all here from my count.
“There are seven of us up here.” Deception replied back. Satan Jr. and Omanga looked at each other than both burst into laughter.
“I think she used too much of her magic and its messing with her head.” Omanga laughed.
“I am serious.” She stomped.
“Then where is he?” Omanga asked.
“Right here.” Deception pointed.
“Um, baby there is no one there.” Saint Jr. pointed out.
“Ugh I do not have time for this little bitch childish game. If she wants to stay here she can. I am leaving now.” Queen Titan said as she once more began to go towards the gate. That’s when Jugo walked up. His body was covered with cuts and bruises. He was also dragging Hercules’s body across the clouds as he approached the group.
“Jugo my man! Where have you been I have been looking all over for you?” Satan Jr. said as he put his arm around Jugo.
“What?! No you won’t you was about to leave him here.” Deception said furiously.
“Hush now Deception don’t you see two adults are here trying to talk. You should go a play somewhere.” Satan Jr. said as he tried to shoo her away.
“Oh really? Well I guess I will be sleeping with the twins then since I am just a child in your eyes.” Deception answered back.
“Oh come on bae, don’t be like that.” Satan Jr. said as he tried to give Deception a hug. She pushed him off her and continued to walk away. Hercules open one eye and seen Satan Jr. wide open for an attack. He gripped Dremon and then took off as he charged Satan Jr.
“You die here!” He yelled as he went to stab Satan Jr. But once again his attempt was foiled by Jugo. His Dremon pierce Jugo’s right forearm.
“Did you’ll hear something?” Satan Jr. asked as he turned around.
He had seen Hercules standing there.
“Oh my Hercules you can still stand, Jugo you should fix that.”
Jugo then cocked back and hit Hercules with a mean left. The light left Hercules eyes as he hit the bed of clouds. Jugo took Dremon out his arm and walked over to Hercules’s motionless body. He lift the blade up and was about to strike when Satan Jr. spoke.
“Jugo no. We have to go.”
“And just leave that prick alive are you nuts?” Canos asked.
“Yeah if he won’t we will.” Kronos answered.
“Yeah well knock ya’ll self out, but when ya’ll end up dead remember it was ya’ll fault.” Satan Jr. said as he began to walk towards the gate.
“Oh yeah and how would we die?” Canos asked.
“Yeah if anything we are increasing our chances of survival by killing Hercules now.” Kronos said.
“You morons don’t get it do ya’ll. Ya’ll queen was attack by Barry Kindheart group, which is the platoon that serves under Hercules. Once God is safe they will come looking for him.” Satan Jr. explained.
“So we will bash them too.” Canos said back.
“At the power levels we are at now. No way at best we could just fight them off, and on top of that we don’t even know where the fuck the Zodiac core is at.” Satan Jr. further explained.
“Zodiac core?” Kronos asked.
“Ugh, I forgot you two are relatively young so ya’ll do not know this, but the Zodiac core was the reason why Nirvana was able to defeat the Dark Forrest troops in the first Great War. The Zodiac core is an exceptional group of angels.”
“Ha, they are angels though, which means we have the upper hand.” Canos said with confidence.
“You are really stupid aren’t you?” Satan Jr. said.
Canos growled when Queen Titian spoke.
“He is right Canos. We have no chance against the Zodiac core.”
“But my lady, he just said they are mere angels and we have the power to negate both god and Angelic magic.” Canos argued back.
“But the Zodiac core is anything but mere angels. They were made by both Satan and God, and then trained by Gabriel and Michel. To make matters worse they have Titian blood running through there vanes as well. Mcotter, The red Titian gave them the Info they needed in exchange for the right to become human. God promise him that and now the Zodiac core is able to defy our cancellation magic because of the Titan blood in there vanes.” Queen Titian explained.
“Yes, which is why we need to go like now? Jugo drop the sword and let’s go.” Satan Jr. Said as he ran out of the gate. They all returned back to earth.
Back on earth where Gabriel, Michel and Bain were………
The city was totally destroyed nothing was there but a giant dirt circle where a city once stood. There was a little gold ball at the far east edge of the city. There was Gabriel, Michel and the few people they could save.
“That damn kid is really powerful.” Gabriel huffed as he dropped his force field.
Michel walked over to his brother who fell to his knees. “I know it took all of you to block that attack and not just protect you but me and those people. Take your much needed rest brother.”
Gabriel then lay on his back and closed his eyes. Michel then grabbed his blade.
“I can since ya’ll energy. I know ya’ll do not want to fight no more than I do.” Michel pronounced.
“You are right we just came here to pick up a team member as all.” Satan Jr. voiced back.
Michel then put back up his blade and then asked, “So why did you send little Bain here? What was your end game? Do ya’ll even care about that child like we do?”
“Why are you worried? He is branded a traitor now, which in heaven is punishable by death in the Caeli Anima Eater.” Satan Jr. Replied back.
Michel did not say anything. He just looked in Jugo’s arms. Jugo was holding a very wiped out and tired Bain.
“Look believe it or not Uncle I am doing you a favor. Just think, if we wouldn’t have come here to get young B here then you would be left in a rift. I know you and Uncle Gabriel do not want to see Bain die by the Caeli Anima Eater, but if ya’ll would not have tuned in his body then ya’ll would have been label as traitors, however if one of his allies was to come save him and left you with no choice but to let them walk away well now you don’t have to worry about being label as a traitor or having to kill young B. Everyone wins.” Satan Jr. explained.
Michel did not answer as he watched them disappear from sight.
Three months after Satan Jr. Attack on Nirvana God decided it was best if he went to Gahanna himself to see if he could figure why Satan allow his son to attack his home.
“Father, please I did not send that attack at you, you have my word.” Satan pleaded.
“What’s a lie from a cowardly snake?” Hercules mocked.
“Father please.” Satan begged.
“Well if you did not encourage this attack then tell me what have you done to punish your son?” God asked.
“Nothing…” Satan mumbled.
“Nothing and you expect my king to believe you had nothing to do with this attack. God please just give the word I will cut this liar down.” Hercules said as he pulled his blade. That’s when he felt a blade to his neck. The being that was holding the blade to Hercules throat came to the front of him. It was Igtytous and his eyes were filled with fire.
“In Nirvana, maybe even on earth you may have the right to voice your opinion the way you please but here in Gahanna you will watch what you say.”
Hercules grew a cocky smile and asked, “And if I don’t?”
Igtytous press the blade closer to Hercules’s throat and that cocky smile Hercules once had disappeared quickly.
That’s when all the Angel warriors pulled out their weapons.
“I don’t think ya’ll want to do that.” Explosior sang as he snapped his fingers together. A green fire ball appeared in his hand.
“Nah don’t warn them. Come on you punk ass angels, I haven’t kicked some angelic ass in a minute.” Viss provoked as he balled up his fist.
“Children stand down now.” Satan demanded.
“But father they are in our home disrespecting us. Saying that they don’t care that we didn’t attack them. Father they came to-”
“Igtytous! Do you dare defy me? Are you no better than that brother of yours who is out there causing havoc?”
Igtytous looked at his father who was on his hands and knees pleading to his father.
“Please father forgive my sons for their stupidity and pride. I know in their heart they are very, very sorry. Aren’t ya’ll?” Satan asked even though he never lifted his head.
Igtytous hesitated for a second before sheath his sword. And got down on his hands and knees.
“Igtytous but…” Explosior mumbled.
“We are sorry grandfather for our blatantly disrespectful tone towards you and your warriors. Please forgive us.” Igtytous apologized.
Both Viss and Explosior looked at Igtytous and then at each other before getting on their hands and knees begging for forgiveness.
“Simpletons, we should kill all of you right now for ya’ll Ignorance.” Hercules barked.
God held up his hand and Hercules went quiet.
“I see you have control over these boys however from what I seen I can conclude your oldest boy act out on his own, so tell me what punishment do you think suits your son?” God asked.
“If you will allow father I would like to bring him here and trail him. He is one of mines there for he should receive his punishment here.” Satan said.
“What?! No that is not right. God, he should be trailed in Nirvana. He killed Donville, His bitch killed Poseidon, a noble knight in your circle; my best friend. God that monster needs to-”
“That’s enough Hercules!” God Bellowed. Satan’s mansion shook heavily as his father voice bounced off the walls.
Hercules quickly grew quiet and did not speak again. He flicked his cape and walked out the mansion. God eyes where fixed on Satan. His eyes held so much hate and dislike towards the little being that was at his enormous feet.
But for some reason his heart felt sorry, and wish to help the little being who was once known as Nirvana savior, and it’s once beloved oldest child Lucifer.
“If I allow you to handle this son what promises can you give me?” God asked.
“He will receive the maximum punishment for his crimes he has committed. I will see to it personally.”
“Is that so?” God asked is disbelief.
“I can hear your distrust for my proposal.” Satan said sadly.
“Yes well, from one father to another you can understand why. I know when it comes to a fathers child they will do anything to protect their child.” God said back.
“Yes I understand your concern and for that I want to propose a plan. Allow my kids as well as my army to combine with your troops. That way you can keep an eye on us.” Satan proposed.
“Not a bad idea my son, okay so from here on out we will combine forces. Of course we will have to keep this on the hush though. The earth dwellers cannot see angels and demons working together, understood?” God asked.
“Yes father I understand.” Satan replied back. God then snapped his fingers and him and his army left Gahanna.
Meanwhile in the dark forest………………………………………
Bain is in a room knocked out when his sister entered. She had a cold rag in her hand and put it on Bain’s head. She rubbed his face and his eyes opened.
“So I see you woke now.” She smiled.
Bain mouth moved and she burst out laughing.
“Smart ass I know I can’t see you for real.” She grew quiet as a tear fell from her right eye. Bain sat up and put his arms around his sister. He kissed her on the cheek and moved his lips again.
“I love you too.” She smiled. A titian servant came to their door and knocked.
“Yes?” Deception answered the knock.
“Master Satan Jr. has requested you and your brother’s bodies down in my queen’s throne room.” The servant said back.
“Okay, we are on our way.” She said. The servant then left. Bain took his hand a rubbed his sister face. She smiled and got up. She grabbed Bain’s hand and said “Come on let’s go see what lord evil Jr. has up his sleeve this time.”
“Can we hear your plan now?” Queen Titan asked impatiently.
“Not till my baby and her brother show up. Besides don’t you want them to meet that dashingly handsome young man you brought with you?” Satan Jr. asked.
Queen Titian rolled eyes. A couple of minutes later Bain and Deception both showed up.
“Hey there’s my baby.” Satan Jr. said as he went to kiss her but she just moved her face back. “Are you serious?” Satan Jr. asked.
“Dead serious.” Deception rolled her eyes.
“But I thought we made up last night.” Satan Jr. argued.
Deception laughed. “You think cause we had sex last night I forgave you for being so rude to me in Nirvana. You got me twisted I simply slept with you cause I had urges that I wanted you to handle for me. That’s it.”
“Wow she more ruthless then Satan Jr. Makes me wonder if she could be a spawn of Satán that was just given human life.” Omanga thought to himself.
Deception eyes wonder off Satan Jr. to the dark skin young man that sat in Queen Titians thrown. She grew a beautiful smile as her and the dark skin young man eyes connected.
“Well now I have never seen you before.” She smiled as she walked up towards him.
He smiled and retaliated, “You must be bae.” Deception smiled.
“As cute as your aura is I most defiantly can be your bae.” She flirted back as she twirled her hair.
Satan Jr. coughed a couple times aloud and that’s when Jugo stepped between Deception and the young dark skin man.
“Jugo!!!!! Move!!!! You are blocking the view.” Deception argued. Jugo just looked at her.
“Ugh, fine!” She yelled as she started to go back to stand beside Bain. “I don’t know why you still respect him. He clearly tried to leave you in Nirvana.” She continued.
The dark skin young man eyes connected with Jogo’s sky blue eyes.
“Does the guard dog have a name or can I just call him your little bitch?” The dark skin young man directed to Satan Jr.
Satan Jr. just laughed. “That is Jugo, and if I can advise you be careful how you speak to him, my bitch has a bit of a temper and is known for hurting people with just the snap of my fingers.”
Satan Jr. then fell back; but before he could even hit the floor Omanga slither under him. He coiled his body so his master had somewhere to sit. His head rested on Satan Jr. lap as Satan Jr. sat on his body.
“This is my pet, Omanga, and over there is Bain. Now that you know all of us can we know you, or do we just call you Queen’s Bitch number 3.” Satan Jr. mocked back. That’s when kronos and canos both snarled and jumped down.
“You will watch your mouth when addressing him.”
“Or other words we will make you.”
“Oh yeah? And how do you plan to do that Queen’s bitch 1 and 2.”
“That does it I am going to kill you!” Kronos yelled.
That’s when a loud laugh came shooting threw the room. The twin beast turned to the dark skin young man. He was laughing. Once he was done he spoke.
“Canos, Kronos stand down. Do not let a low class demon work you’ll up so much.”
“Low class??? Obviously you don’t know who this man is sitting in front of you.” Omanga said.
“No I don’t, you care to tell me?” The Dark skin young man asked.
“This is Satan Jr. Prince of Gahanna and thee most feared demon ever to walk.” Omanga protested.
“Oh he is a prince. So am I.” The dark skin young man said back with a smile.
“Yes I know, you are Queen Titian’s oldest child out of two. You are known as the Ice blue titian, right Prince Titian?” Satan Jr. Inquire with a smile.
“Hmm seem someone has been doing their homework. But don’t think you were the only one who has been doing their homework my friend.”
“Oh well please let me know what you know.”
“For you to be the most feared demon to ever walk you got man handled not once but twice. Once by Michel and Gabriel, and the second by your younger brother Igtytous. After that you was force to leave Gahanna, and hide in the dark forest where you are the most hated at. Although you were able to survive here, I never knew why but now seeing this gigantic being here, name is Jugo right? Anyway when you reappeared he was with you and most of the Titans that reside in this forest grew scared of you. I give the credit to Jugo here. Afterwards you finally decided that if you ever had a chance at ruling Nirvana and Gahanna you would need to inquire help. So you came to my mother. Somehow you were able to sway her from killing you, and not having you as an enemy. Once again credit I give to your big friend over here. Now that you have Jugo, and the Titians behind you, you were virtually unstoppable. But you knew you were still beatable. So you decided to go get more fire power. You risk not only your life, but Jugo’s, Kronos’s, and Canos’s lives as well to break into Hell to save Isabella, a.k.a Deception, b.a.k.a young bae. Ya’ll would have died there too, if it wasn’t for a specific angel coming to ya’ll aid. Which have me fascinated, because I don’t know which one of them are stronger. The Human/juggernaut or the very quiet voice yet very loud power house angel. Either way this has given you a huge advantage against both Gahanna and Nirvana. But you still are hesitating to attack either, why is that???? I don’t know that is why I am here. To figure out your big play, and see if it is worth me and my people to get involved any further.”
Satan Jr. just clapped and smiled. “Wow, you really did your homework on me. I feel special. What about you guys, don’t ya’ll fill special. He knew everything down to the millisecond of when I return to Gahanna after getting beaten by Gabriel and Michel.”
Prince Titian just smiled. “So tell us what your plan is.”
“Well of course, I plan to bring back King Titian, find my brother Dio Della Guerra. With those two on our team we will be unstoppable. Not even the Zodiac core will be able to stop us.”
Prince Titian looked down before laughing. “That’s your big move. You got to be the dumbest… look one my father is dead. There is no bringing that fool back, secondly Dio Della Guerra does not exist. It is even said if he was real that was my father, which means he is dead as well.”
Satan Jr. shrugged. “Believe what you want, but just think this, if I am right and I can get both of them and the titans fall behind again, never being able to rise to there once glorious ranking again. Do you really want to be labeled as the one who stopped ya’ll from becoming great again?”
Prince Titian did not say a word.
“Oh well okay. Bain, Jugo, Deception, and Omanga we out.” Satan Jr said. The group of beings was about to leave out when…
“Wait.”
“Yes?” Satan Jr. asked as an honest curious smile grew under his nose.
“If you are serious about this then we need you to do something for us for.” Prince Titian said.
“Of course what do you need?”
“We need you to find a girl; she is probably only 12 now.” Prince Titian said as he snapped his fingers. One of his servants came out and gave a picture to Satan Jr.
He looked at the picture.
“Ooo, she cute,” Deception said.
“Who is she?” Satan Jr. asked.
“Her name is Tara Eaglehorn. A young girl being trained to become a priestess/holy warrior.
“Priestess??? Are you dumb, we are demons why on earth would we go and try to kidnap a priestess?” Omanga hissed loudly.
“Because she is my daughter reincarnated.” Queen Titan explained.
“Oh shit, for real? That is the pink panther terrorist Titian. She looks so happy. So innocent. Are you sure this is her?” Satan Jr. asked.
“Yes. That is her to an extent anyway. See years ago the red titian, after being freed by god fell in love with a woman. Her name was Ellen Eaglehorn. She grew ill and god wouldn’t help the red titian again. All hope seemed lost, but my sister…what a fool. Still in love with the red titan after he betrayed us, had our father killed. Had our people running and hiding, she still loved him. She went to go to his aid. She wanted to be with him, so she fused her life force with Ellen’s so that she could be with that snake. Anyway every few generations or so my sister life force shows up in a girl of Eaglehorn blood. This time it is Tara.” Prince Titian explained.
“Oh I see, so we help you find the girl and you will stick with us till the end.”
“Indeed.”
“So then what are we waiting for, we have work to do.”
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Hello! I'm here representing team Potter on review day!
I think, while this is an interesting concept, the execution needs work. Meandbooks is right about potentially offending three different religions in this work if you don't treat each deity with reverence. I'm not a Christian, but I could see that your portrayal of Jesus would offend Christians already.
Your chapter is chock full of grammar errors. I'm not going to go through and correct all of them for you, but I noticed a few repeated mistakes that I can give you examples on how to fix. One of your main problems is run on sentences. Run on sentences have incorrectly linked clauses in them. A clause is a thought. Sometimes, it is a complete thought. A complete thought is an independent clause. Use conjunctions like and, or, or but to connect independent clauses. You can also use a semi-colon. You also should use a comma before a conjunction. The section I've picked out below needs a comma after "pincer." Also, because you're talking about more than one person, you should use "were" instead of "was."
Another repeated mistake that I saw was your use of dialogue punctuation.
Instead of a period after "grandfather," you should have used a comma. If you use a dialogue tag, which is a descriptor about who said the line, or how they said it, after the dialogue, you should use a comma. Unless the character is asking a question. Then use a question mark. However, if you use a question mark, the dialogue is still part of the following sentence, so be sure NOT to capitalize the first letter after the dialogue.
This is very long, and I think it would be more effective if you broke it up into chunks. I don't understand why there are so many different places in one chapter. Another note on places: I have no visual knowledge of setting in most of these places. There are no props, no cups sipped from, no chairs creaking as characters sit down-- the landscape is important as it helps set the tone.
In the first section, it is very difficult to follow the dialogue because of the way you refer to the characters by the colors of their eyes.
Altogether, I hope that this review proves useful to you. Happy review day!
Thank you and I appreciate your review, but as I stated to meanbooks, the way you two see the religions in this story is totally different from how I am trying to tell this story. But I thank you for your criticism and will take everything you said and try my best to fix these errors
Hi there! I'm here for a quick review this Review Day.
So, this is an interesting piece. It seems to me like you're combining Christian beliefs with Greek mythology and a little bit of Buddhism as well. While it could make for an interesting story, you have to be careful when doing something like that, because if you aren't, you wind up basically disrespecting the beliefs of three separate groups of people. (Yes, there are still people who believe in the Greek Gods.) And that's not cool. Not to mention, it's not going to sell your story very well. I mean, you're not going to get jumped all over like you would if you did this with Native Americans, because Christians aren't minorities, but it is still offensive to them and they won't want to read it.
But anyway, you've definitely got an interesting start. Your characters' personalities come off strongly right from the start, which is good.
The problem is, I feel like I've been thrown into the deep end. All I know is you've got mythology figures/set pieces from at least different religions, but I don't know or understand how any of them interact at all. There's no exposition, no explanations of how all of them work together. And for someone who isn't versed in these religions/mythologies at all, it's just going to be even more confusing. So I'd recommend starting slowly, picking one or two viewpoint characters, and making sure to show us their thoughts and feelings and explain what's going on.
Also, this could use a bit of a proofread - there are several instances where names aren't capitalized, as well as other grammar errors.
(Also, just a quick note, probably the reason you haven't gotten any reviews on this is because of how long it is. Generally, it's better to post your stories/novels in chunks of 2000ish words, as that's about as long of a part that people have the time to review.)
And that's all I've got for you!
Thank you, but I will tell you, that the way this book is formatted is a bit different then what you are thinking. One, the book deals with all three religons in different ways....as the story goes on you will learn how each three interacts with one another. Like for instances, I think I put in there that Zeus and Poseidon where from another dimension, and So are the Buddha dragons. The only religion that is of our dimension is Christianity, but thanks for the review.