Published April 13, 2007
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This is much more like a song, actually... a song with dancing. Which is pretty cool, if you think about it.
With that said, some of the parts don't really make sense. Like... the glands. I don't know. For me, it sounds kind of forced.
I actually like Part Three the best because it seemed the most honest, like you guys weren't trying as hard. And, for some reason, this made it sound much freer, which I like.
Hope that helps!